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The Tale of Hairless Cat

They say, just there beyond the valley, that
there lived inside a house a little cat
who never went outside to run and play;
she chose to spend her time indoors each day.

They named her Hairless Cat.  Her owners called
her that because their little pet was bald.
She was a different breed of cat, and true,
her skin was bare- on Hairless no fur grew.

Some days a while back, she’d gone outside
but never stayed out long, came in to hide;
the kitties tried ignoring her, and so
would not befriend her- would not say hello.

Now, Hairless Cat, aware that she was shy
and different from others that passed by,
began to think of special ways to cope
and make them friendlier- so there was hope.

She thought and thought, whatever she could do,
to let them know beneath her bare-skin view,
there lives a nice, smart kitten hoping that
she could be friends with each and every cat.

That night it came to her within a dream;
come morning, she began to smile and beam!
Her owners left the door somewhat ajar
when they left home for shopping in their car.

Her bowl of yummy dry food in the room
was filled up to the top, and very soon,
she carried dry food nibbles, one by one,
out through the door onto the porch till done.

She stood beside her feast, began to eat,
and soon the cats came by, did not retreat-
but closer to the porch they came to see
that Hairless Cat had planned a cat party.

They came to share the feast each, one by one,
and Hairless Cat was happy they had come!
Her lonely days were over, she had won,
and every day, from then, with friends had fun.

"The moral of this story is: if you
are lonely, and you need a friend or two,
you must reach out to them and make them see
what a good friend to them you want to be."


September 20, 2015

Contest: Fabled Musings
Sponsor: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 2:55 PM
so good to read this again Sandra (apart from the image lol) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:56 AM
I really enjoyed the tale, Sandra and could vividly picture the scene from your description. Congratulations on the win.
May Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Friendship is a two way street, Wonderful write Sandra, Congrats on your win..
Fowler Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Great one Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Grasso Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 7:02 AM
Beautiful Sandra, congratulations on this win! ...Fran
Somadas Avatar
February 18, 2020 at 12:12 AM
Your Hairless Cat is winning contests.. Wonderful write with a moral too.. Great win Sandra..
Rycroft Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Great story congrats Sandra x
Stebbings Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Congratulations on you win, Sandra. Enjoyed reading this moral tale. I always feel so sorry for these cats. Barry
Lawless Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on your placement Sandra. Who can resist a party...
Eastman Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on the win! A wonderful tale.
Y. Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Hi Sandra, I enjoyed reading this tall tale. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Lamoureux Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Great story! Congrats.
Day Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 2:46 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - revived a beautifully written poem! - Jesse
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Congrats... SK
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 5:14 PM
Sandra, what an excellent teaching tool your poem creates. Big congratulations on your wonderful win! 7
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thank you so much, Connie. I am happy you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your positive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Aah! Just to live in a world of fables and reviving childhood! Congrats Sandra!
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Balveen, yes, fables are fun for sure. Thank you so much for reading my poem and for your congratulations on my win! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Haight Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Thank you, Sara, for your positive comment and congratulations. Always appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Superb write Sandra! Congrats on big win!
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Thank you once again, Dr. Upma. I so much appreciate your support. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 3:44 PM
hey, you did it with a moral!! How clever. A GREAT win for a great poem
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Thanks, Andrea, thanks for your visit and support! Sandra
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September 24, 2015 at 10:40 AM
Beautiful story. I love this, Sandra. Congrats! hugs!
Haight Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Hi Kim, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Nance Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 7:33 AM
You are a great story teller Sandra, I love your form, your whole poem was just well done, I appreciate it thank you, and grats on your win
Haight Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Hi Casarah, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your nice comments and the wonderful placement in your contest. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
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September 22, 2015 at 3:39 PM
Enjoyed this lovely story, Sandra! Felt sorry for Hairless Cat, but he is a winner in the end. The moral is one that ought to be heeded by both shy and lonely people. // paul
Haight Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Thank you, Paul. I appreciate your positive comments so much. Sandra
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September 20, 2015 at 10:08 AM
I enjoyed this uplifting, sweet, well told story. The rhyme and form make for an enjoyable read. Well done ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 7:09 PM
Thank you so much for your visit, CayCay, and for your supportive comments about my poem. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 12:27 AM
I have to admit the image made me shudder Sandra but the poem is charming! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 12:47 AM
:-) I have an allergy to animal fur but could never get one of those poor cats:-( hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 12:34 AM
You know, Jan, I think you're right! It WAS creepy, especially for a child, and I removed it! Thanks! Glad you liked the poem. Hugs, Sandra
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