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They say, just there beyond the valley, that there lived inside a house a little cat who never went outside to run and play; she chose to spend her time indoors each day. They named her Hairless Cat. Her owners called her that because their little pet was bald. She was a different breed of cat, and true, her skin was bare- on Hairless no fur grew. Some days a while back, she’d gone outside but never stayed out long, came in to hide; the kitties tried ignoring her, and so would not befriend her- would not say hello. Now, Hairless Cat, aware that she was shy and different from others that passed by, began to think of special ways to cope and make them friendlier- so there was hope. She thought and thought, whatever she could do, to let them know beneath her bare-skin view, there lives a nice, smart kitten hoping that she could be friends with each and every cat. That night it came to her within a dream; come morning, she began to smile and beam! Her owners left the door somewhat ajar when they left home for shopping in their car. Her bowl of yummy dry food in the room was filled up to the top, and very soon, she carried dry food nibbles, one by one, out through the door onto the porch till done. She stood beside her feast, began to eat, and soon the cats came by, did not retreat- but closer to the porch they came to see that Hairless Cat had planned a cat party. They came to share the feast each, one by one, and Hairless Cat was happy they had come! Her lonely days were over, she had won, and every day, from then, with friends had fun. "The moral of this story is: if you are lonely, and you need a friend or two, you must reach out to them and make them see what a good friend to them you want to be." September 20, 2015 Contest: Fabled Musings Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 2/15/2021 2:55:00 PM
so good to read this again Sandra (apart from the image lol) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/14/2021 8:56:00 AM
I really enjoyed the tale, Sandra and could vividly picture the scene from your description. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 2/14/2021 8:31:00 AM
Friendship is a two way street, Wonderful write Sandra, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 2/14/2021 8:03:00 AM
Great one Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/18/2020 7:02:00 AM
Beautiful Sandra, congratulations on this win! ...Fran
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Date: 2/18/2020 12:12:00 AM
Your Hairless Cat is winning contests.. Wonderful write with a moral too.. Great win Sandra..
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:54:00 PM
Great story congrats Sandra x
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Date: 7/6/2016 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on you win, Sandra. Enjoyed reading this moral tale. I always feel so sorry for these cats. Barry
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Date: 7/6/2016 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on your placement Sandra. Who can resist a party...
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Date: 7/6/2016 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on the win! A wonderful tale.
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Date: 7/6/2016 8:52:00 AM
Hi Sandra, I enjoyed reading this tall tale. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/6/2016 7:55:00 AM
Great story! Congrats.
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - revived a beautifully written poem! - Jesse
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:02:00 PM
Congrats... SK
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Date: 9/26/2015 5:14:00 PM
Sandra, what an excellent teaching tool your poem creates. Big congratulations on your wonderful win! 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2015 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie. I am happy you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your positive comment and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/26/2015 3:58:00 PM
Aah! Just to live in a world of fables and reviving childhood! Congrats Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2015 9:45:00 AM
Balveen, yes, fables are fun for sure. Thank you so much for reading my poem and for your congratulations on my win! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/25/2015 2:50:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/2/2015 9:43:00 AM
Thank you, Sara, for your positive comment and congratulations. Always appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/24/2015 10:55:00 PM
Superb write Sandra! Congrats on big win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2015 9:35:00 AM
Thank you once again, Dr. Upma. I so much appreciate your support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/24/2015 3:44:00 PM
hey, you did it with a moral!! How clever. A GREAT win for a great poem
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2015 9:34:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, thanks for your visit and support! Sandra
Date: 9/24/2015 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful story. I love this, Sandra. Congrats! hugs!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2015 9:34:00 AM
Hi Kim, thank you so much for your nice comment and congrats! I appreciate it so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/23/2015 7:33:00 AM
You are a great story teller Sandra, I love your form, your whole poem was just well done, I appreciate it thank you, and grats on your win
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/23/2015 11:46:00 AM
Hi Casarah, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your nice comments and the wonderful placement in your contest. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/22/2015 3:39:00 PM
Enjoyed this lovely story, Sandra! Felt sorry for Hairless Cat, but he is a winner in the end. The moral is one that ought to be heeded by both shy and lonely people. // paul
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/23/2015 11:47:00 AM
Thank you, Paul. I appreciate your positive comments so much. Sandra
Date: 9/20/2015 10:08:00 AM
I enjoyed this uplifting, sweet, well told story. The rhyme and form make for an enjoyable read. Well done ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2015 7:09:00 PM
Thank you so much for your visit, CayCay, and for your supportive comments about my poem. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Date: 9/20/2015 12:27:00 AM
I have to admit the image made me shudder Sandra but the poem is charming! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2015 12:47:00 AM
:-) I have an allergy to animal fur but could never get one of those poor cats:-( hugs jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/20/2015 12:34:00 AM
You know, Jan, I think you're right! It WAS creepy, especially for a child, and I removed it! Thanks! Glad you liked the poem. Hugs, Sandra

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