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Revisiting the park of my childhood, I envision myself and my sisters. We are laughing and shouting, running this way and that. “Let’s go on the swing set,” I say. We each grab a swing, and as if in a contest, we begin to pump our legs, pushing ourselves backward, then leaning forward and up! We’re giggling birds, and our lean little legs are wings taking us higher and higher to the sky. No limit is there on our time! It’s summer, and like birds, we are free. At times we get lost in our own quiet thoughts - I revel in the mere pleasure of hearing and feeling the wind in my hair as I swing and I swing till I tire of it. Boldly then, I take a wild leap forward straight out of my seat right as the swing has reached its highest peak! Agilely I land on my two feet, no worries about a bad back, sore neck or aging knees. I’m oozing with audaciousness in the spring of my youth, and I have nothing to fear. Reality hits me. The whoops of running children no longer are heard. The park is deserted. The kids of today are likely elsewhere texting on cell phones! In the quiet, I hear all of a sudden the croon of a bird. It’s calling to me, “Go to the swing set.” I walk to a swing and sit down. Like riding a bike, it always comes back. I’m older now, but the child inside me is winging. Just for a moment, I feel so alive. Then a quesiness grasps at my stomach. I let the swing slow to a stop. The swing set is creaking along with my bones - bones that dare not take a leap mid-air just to leave this swinging chair! No sisters are with me. Spring is long gone. I stand in the gloaming of the season . . . and the bird – why has it stopped its sweet song? Sorry it's not a new one but it's one of mine that never got many reads: For Silent One's That was Then, This is Now contest

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Date: 2/7/2020 9:50:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest with this sadly beautiful write _Constance
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Date: 2/7/2020 2:49:00 AM
I so enjoyed reading through these happy, carefree memories then the contrast of the sudden jolt back to reality, Andrea. Such simple pleasures and at least with swings, unlike see-saws, you were always in control of the motion! Some lovely touches - 'We’re giggling birds, and our lean little legs are wings taking us higher and higher to the sky' was wonderful! ( queasiness?)
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Date: 2/6/2020 3:47:00 PM
Andrea congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:56:00 PM
"I’m older now, but the child inside me is winging." A hearty 'you go, girl!' for that youthful attitude. They say, "You can't go back", but your memories can. Thank you for the trip down happy childhood lane, and congrats on another win. Hugs ~ John
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/6/2020 6:44:00 PM
thanks, John. You are a such a supportive friend here.
Date: 2/6/2020 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your first place placement! Thank for reminding us that often it is the simplest things, like swings, that bring us back to childhood and how things have changed since that time - wonderful irony.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/6/2020 6:43:00 PM
thanks for such kind words.
Date: 1/27/2019 9:33:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming to say congratulations on your 2nd place win:') Alexis
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:10:00 AM
How life changes, a sentimental write Andrea.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 11/5/2017 10:22:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Andrea. I too love to answer the call of swings but learned to go at it a bit more gently with age. But with the wind in our hair and our eyes closed, we become ageless if only for a minute.
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Date: 11/4/2017 4:18:00 PM
A lovely write Andrea, congrats :)
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Date: 10/31/2017 5:36:00 PM
Okay, woman, you caught me in a time when life was kinder. The swings I see are rusting these days; your lovely poem addressed that to a tee. Aye!
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Date: 10/31/2017 2:11:00 PM
Love the poem. I also keep on flashbacking to swinging memory. A girls camp I went to had a long-hanging swing that swung so high, it was a delight. I dared myself a few times to swing it over the top, but never did. I could have killed myself.
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Date: 10/31/2017 9:40:00 AM
Hi Andrea, You penned such a beautiful and nostalgic write. Our loved ones are always "there" in our memories. Thanks for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/31/2017 6:18:00 AM
Soup mail!
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Date: 10/30/2017 8:51:00 PM
Andrea, I really enjoyed your nostalgic write. I think our child inside is always winging. If it had been me, I would have taken the mid-air leap... John
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Date: 10/30/2017 4:25:00 PM
What a great write Andrea..I was hoping you would do that wild leap again....lol....hugs
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Date: 10/30/2017 7:22:00 AM
Was this encouraged by the State Farm moose swing set advertisement. When your sweet poems left so did all of the sweet singing. Say hi to Bruce for me.
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Date: 10/30/2017 6:06:00 AM
This is actually heartbreaking reflections.. how sad, sometimes I think back and remember so many who are no longer here... this is one of your deeper and more emotive writes.. it really touches the heart and will make others reminisce of times gone by..
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Date: 10/30/2017 5:57:00 AM
A contrast well depicted in your poem Andrea--the ending line is quite telling--best for a win!
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Date: 10/30/2017 5:46:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this poem is so fantastic, what an ingenious write! I Loved this incredible write soooo much, it still is resonating within me! The sadness of having the past drifting away, and the memories bringing a tear to your eye just by the thought of your sisters and you swinging with glee in your youth....but now it is so distant, like the stars bright and beautiful, but cold and far away! Just as the seasons come and go, so do the thoughts of the past, may your thought be happy ones! GW!!
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Date: 10/30/2017 1:14:00 AM
A lovely piece, Andrea. I ,too, have often felt that urge to 'have a go' at the playground, but am maybe a little too wide too manage a swing. I have had a go on a roundabout on a quiet Sunday morning. My head stopped spinning on Tuesday :) Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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