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The Swan

Looking down at her in the casket, I recall the days her lissome body swayed like a willow upon the stage. How she loved ballet, especially the ballet called Swan Lake. Also, how she loved the Lord! Then the cancer came. She was so young. Even in the throes of it, like Job of old, she would simply not besmirch the name of God. How graceful she was even in death, for she was in agony until the very end. I respectully observe her in celestial repose. She is still a dancing swan whose soul no one can pinion. To the firmament she has taken flight. Her sojourn on this earth was brief, yet her faith and courage live on in the hearts of those of us who loved her and always will forevermore May 29, 2018 for John Hamilton's Eight Word Challenge-4 Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/11/2020 1:04:00 PM
So pensive, filled with the melancholy journey of grief but framed with the beauty of her life. Lovely remembrance. Congratulations my friend.
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Date: 3/11/2020 12:10:00 AM
A loving, poetic tribute to a talented and faithful dancer. Well done, and congrats on your win! ~ John
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Date: 7/4/2018 11:59:00 AM
I remember this. Sad, beautiful poem. Back again to congratulate you for your win again!
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:39:00 AM
sadly beautiful sweet Andrea, I felt the emotional loss and heartbreak. lovely poem, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/9/2018 11:48:00 PM
This poem sings from a depth of understanding how one soul can touch so many others. Beautiful Andrea! Congratulations on your win! A fave from me! : )
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Date: 6/9/2018 10:25:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 6/6/2018 7:03:00 PM
What a lovely tribute. Superbly done, Andrea.
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Date: 6/5/2018 2:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win with such a touching verse.
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:31:00 PM
Back to congratulate you for this win. A lovely verse.
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:44:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, Andrea, with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:09:00 AM
Wonderful poem Andrea, thank you for your touching winning entry!
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Date: 5/29/2018 10:34:00 PM
" A lovely and bittersweet free verse, Andrea .. Brava!! Best Wishes..
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Date: 5/29/2018 6:58:00 PM
Yes! I can totally identify with this, Andrea. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 5/29/2018 4:54:00 PM
love how you weave the words for the contest, in with your imagination,,or is it true? These stories hug the headlines everyday..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2018 6:46:00 PM
a made up one but of course I am sure someone in the world has had this happen to a beloved ballerina friend!
Date: 5/29/2018 4:33:00 PM
Though it touches a sad theme, your poem is deeply felt..emotions well expressed Andrea.
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Date: 5/29/2018 3:15:00 PM
Lovely poem for a dear ballerina, Andrea. I'm sure she (whoever she is) would just love it. I love ballet myself, and Swan Lake is my favorite. Btw, you might like to read my poem, "Swan Song". :D
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Date: 5/29/2018 11:53:00 AM
A deep write using the selected words..
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Date: 5/29/2018 11:26:00 AM
Well written verse Andrea, and the dreaded cancer, how we've all been affected by it in some way. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 5/29/2018 10:11:00 AM
Heartfelt and respectful expression of loss. Good luck in contest. You have a winner.
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Date: 5/29/2018 9:52:00 AM
Oh wow! Must be a challenge to do a poem requiring certain words, you did a most wonderful poem <3
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