The Swan

Looking down at her in the casket,
I recall the days her lissome body
swayed like a willow upon the stage.
How she loved ballet,
especially the ballet called Swan Lake.
Also, how she loved the Lord!

Then the cancer came.
She was so young. Even in the throes of it, 
like Job of old, she would simply not
besmirch the name of God.
How graceful she was even in death,
for she was in agony until the very end.

I respectully observe her in celestial repose.
She is still a dancing swan whose soul no one can pinion. 
To the firmament she has taken flight.
Her sojourn on this earth was brief, 
yet her faith and courage live on
in the hearts of those of us who loved her and always will
forevermore


May 29, 2018 for John Hamilton's Eight Word Challenge-4 Poetry Contest
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Kauffman Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 1:04 PM
So pensive, filled with the melancholy journey of grief but framed with the beauty of her life. Lovely remembrance. Congratulations my friend.
Watt Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 12:10 AM
A loving, poetic tribute to a talented and faithful dancer. Well done, and congrats on your win! ~ John
Gentry Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 11:59 AM
I remember this. Sad, beautiful poem. Back again to congratulate you for your win again!
Scars Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 6:39 AM
sadly beautiful sweet Andrea, I felt the emotional loss and heartbreak. lovely poem, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:48 PM
This poem sings from a depth of understanding how one soul can touch so many others. Beautiful Andrea! Congratulations on your win! A fave from me! : )
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:25 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Andrea.
Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2018 at 7:03 PM
What a lovely tribute. Superbly done, Andrea.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 2:56 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win with such a touching verse.
Gentry Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:31 PM
Back to congratulate you for this win. A lovely verse.
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, Andrea, with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Hamilton Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Wonderful poem Andrea, thank you for your touching winning entry!
B. Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 10:34 PM
" A lovely and bittersweet free verse, Andrea .. Brava!! Best Wishes..
George   Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Yes! I can totally identify with this, Andrea. Sincerely, Elaine
Horsman Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 4:54 PM
love how you weave the words for the contest, in with your imagination,,or is it true? These stories hug the headlines everyday..
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 6:46 PM
a made up one but of course I am sure someone in the world has had this happen to a beloved ballerina friend!
Pandit Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 4:33 PM
Though it touches a sad theme, your poem is deeply felt..emotions well expressed Andrea.
Duet Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Lovely poem for a dear ballerina, Andrea. I'm sure she (whoever she is) would just love it. I love ballet myself, and Swan Lake is my favorite. Btw, you might like to read my poem, "Swan Song". :D
One Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 11:53 AM
A deep write using the selected words..
Cunningham Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Well written verse Andrea, and the dreaded cancer, how we've all been affected by it in some way. Good luck. Tom
Gentry Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Heartfelt and respectful expression of loss. Good luck in contest. You have a winner.
Malik Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 9:52 AM
Oh wow! Must be a challenge to do a poem requiring certain words, you did a most wonderful poem <3
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