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The Sunset Purple

at the end of a perfect day I was rushing home oh, so much to do and so little time from the bus window I watched the sun setting such beauty brought tears to my eyes all the purples and mauve mingling swirling together so perfectly like a painting an artist holding his brush and thinking then placing a touch here and there in time . . . all the way home I watched and even when I left the bus I was mesmerized as the purples became darker and darker and at last in an instant there was darkness I felt uplifted and beautiful too _______________________ February 17, 2018 Poetry/Free Verse/the sunset purple Copyright Protected, ID 18-9951-52-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Sunrise and Sunset sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 4/9/2018 3:08:00 PM
Beautiful, BW. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 2/19/2018 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your wonderful win with your beautifully expressed poem. ~Susan
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Date: 2/19/2018 11:08:00 AM
Sweet remembrance of a trip that leads home. Deft use of color and no rhyme. I like that sometimes. Congrats on your placement
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Date: 2/18/2018 4:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Constance :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 12:28:00 PM
Lovely poem BW.. congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:51:00 AM
- Congratulations, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2018 3:07:00 PM
- Lovely poem, B.W. - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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