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As the sun slip slides down blue skies and sets, streaks of pink, mauve, and gray clouds pave its way. And the night is wrapped in a black silk shawl, whose dark threads snuff out the last light of day. (Arbitrium Divisa) 12,22,2019 Arbitrium Divisa 5 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden Reference poem: (A Black Silk Shawl) Sept. 20, 2019 Because It's A Tuesday 140 - 140 Sonnet Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 1/17/2020 5:39:00 PM
The images you present are beautiful Emile
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/18/2020 8:26:00 AM
Thanks James, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/14/2020 10:11:00 AM
I loved the original poem and I love this excerpt Emile, congrats on your win in Greg's contest!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/15/2020 8:54:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/22/2019 12:37:00 PM
Your lines are as beautiful as the picturesque landscape, Emile. Bold and eerie, but mesmerizing.
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Date: 12/22/2019 1:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Lin, your words have made my day my friend, Emile.

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