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The Suitcase

There is a poor poor man I watch frigid winds blow his way He carries his suitcase of regret As his light slowly turns to grey If only he puts it down I'm sure he'd be okay But he keeps on carrying it day after day. As I go into my house I keep thinking about him The light that was bright That's now starting to dim Is there anything of value to him I might bring? All I possess are my thoughts and the songs that I sing. I think "I'm being silly" So I put him out of my mind It's the start of my becoming both regretful and blind As l start to carry it, this burden of the mind My own spirit diminishes, I become a bit less kind People keep coming and knocking I don't answer my own door I wonder if one day, they won't come any more? My cup of regrets, overflows onto the floor Why oh why, do I continue to pour? My mind is now aching My heart feels so sore What is wrong with me I feel sad to my core. By ignoring my brother My own heart I can't mend I want to be a real person Yet all I do is pretend The whisper of a thought that I'm to afraid to send Might help to bring another's pain to an end So I open my door Head out onto the street There is a poor poor man I'm now ready to meet Our hearts aren't much different Each has a convoluted beat We have our own regrets and we have tired feet Burdens are lightened When we learn to let them go Then through the grey concrete We can watch flowers grow Sure the winds can be cold Yet they eventually slow The sun breaks through the clouds Through our lives the light now flows There is a path that is less traveled let us find out where it goes! I was inspired to write this poem after Reading the poetry of "Inspired Heart" It got me to thinking about my own baggage and the things I choose to carry. When we don't reach out to others our own bags become just a bit heavier.

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Date: 3/14/2016 4:23:00 PM
Richard, this poem really touched my soul, I carry a hug suitcase myself, mine is full of grief, what an incredible write, 7 +++ ~
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Date: 12/31/2015 10:02:00 AM
Oh, my - I can't believe I randomly clicked on a poem that would blow me away. I love the rhyme, the flow and THE CONTENT is so well stated. A Fav and 7 ... CayCay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2015 10:49:00 AM
Thanks Cay Cay, if you have a chance check out the one I wrote for Cyndi's contest.
Date: 12/28/2015 6:32:00 AM
REGRETS... chains of the soul! Very insightful writing, Richard. All the best to you in the New Year. Your friend in poetry, Elaine George
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/28/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks and Happy new year to you as well.
Date: 12/27/2015 12:16:00 AM
I am often at a loss for words, I just so much "get" these type of poems! :) Amazing!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2015 9:10:00 AM
You are kind Arthur.
Date: 12/23/2015 10:51:00 PM
Some times our suitcases are too full of unnecessary things. Well done my dear Love Mom Merry Christmas you will be missed here.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/27/2015 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, you are kind. A Merry and blessed Christmas to you and those you love.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/25/2015 8:45:00 AM
Good morning, it looks like I'm a bit behind on reading comments. I love you and Merry Christmas.
Date: 12/23/2015 1:48:00 AM
We all have such burdens, Richard, some we carry on the outside, and those that burn and eat within. If the whole world reached out, everybody would be touching. merry Christmas and a peaceful New year to you and yours. Regards, Viv
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/23/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Viv, for reaching out! Merry Christmas to you as well.
Date: 12/22/2015 7:00:00 PM
a very symbolic one here. VERY nice message for humanity, Richard. You have such a good heart. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/23/2015 8:28:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, you are kind. A Merry and blessed Christmas to you and those you love.
Date: 12/22/2015 12:18:00 PM
When we reach out to others, our bags become lighter! An excellent poem, Richard. No man is an island...neighbourly love leads to positivity and common good. ~ Best wishes for a blessed Christmas and a prosperous new year. *** paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/22/2015 6:22:00 PM
So true my friend. Merry Christmas to you as well.
Date: 12/21/2015 4:06:00 PM
Thank you Richard for inviting me to your site. I don’t know how heavy your baggage is, but Federico Fellini once said, “The artist is the medium between his fantasies and the rest of the world”. If I was you, I would just start and ended with your last stanza. Burdens are lightened … ( that part is great)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2015 5:34:00 PM
I'm sorry the rest did not meet with your approval. I do however appreciate the visit and comment.
Date: 12/20/2015 6:09:00 PM
love you
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2015 6:39:00 PM
It is good to be loved.
Date: 12/20/2015 3:45:00 PM
Richard..you are talented..Beautifully penned! *smiles*
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2015 6:40:00 PM
Thanks Laura, smiles and hugs ba to you.
Date: 12/20/2015 3:31:00 PM
A great story Richard, I am always drawn into you and your characters, reading the way to the positive outcomes and morals of interaction. Lots of hugs your way my friend xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2015 6:41:00 PM
So nice to see you Casarah, thanks for the nice greeting on Facebook. Hugs back to you.
Date: 12/20/2015 3:04:00 PM
Lovely write, Richard. I like how you emphasize that in the end...we are all the same. We all have our own baggage to carry. Soupmail dear...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2015 6:43:00 PM
I think I have all the typos.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2015 6:43:00 PM
Thanks for being the first to comment.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/20/2015 6:42:00 PM
Thanks for the heads up, I hastily posted this one this morning.

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