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The Storm

The Storm Impatient winds shriek loud with tortured cries, Storm driven rains splash into flooded pools, Silver light streaks across darkened skies, Storm blasted trees bend under the gale's rule. Hail clatters on wind blown streets and paths and Hammers against every door and window pain. Life pauses. Angry souls rage across the land As sunlight gives way to dark tempest's gain. The earth trembles 'til the storm's wrath is done; Calm silence spreads through wet, shimmering leaves, Squalls overtaken by the returning sun. Rain stops. Water drips slow from under eaves, Thunder clouds part, a new light shining through And life, refreshed, awakes and starts anew. 12/08/16 For Contest 'Wordscapes' Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 12/11/2019 5:40:00 PM
Great poem with great imagery, and flow Barry, Enjoyed reading. I also like your Pantoum Except for the one line it’s fantastic. Hugs Eve
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/17/2019 4:43:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. // Barry
Date: 9/23/2016 12:57:00 AM
I can even smell it! Great job.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/23/2016 12:57:00 PM
Thank you, Rick, Barry.
Date: 8/31/2016 6:12:00 PM
Great sonnet well done hun
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 9/1/2016 3:25:00 AM
Thank you, Gail. Barry
Date: 8/20/2016 2:28:00 PM
Great description of the passing of a storm. I can both hear and see it.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/21/2016 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Beverly. Barry
Date: 8/17/2016 9:55:00 PM
Thanks Barry just what I was looking for dynamic words in action!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 8/18/2016 2:50:00 AM
A pleasure, John. Thanks for my win. Barry
Date: 8/12/2016 3:49:00 PM
I deleted this by accident, this is re-posted. If you have already commented, thank you for your comments, there is no need to comment again. Barry
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