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The Storm

The wind was howling and it was raining hard My car had stalled on an old country road Finding an old house in the darkness, I knocked Asked to use her phone to have my car towed She said It’s bad out there, my name is Laura Please wait a second while I get the light I live alone in this old house I’d feel better if you spent the night Later she came to my room After dreams had filled my head That longing in her deep green eyes She crawled into my bed She loved me like no other woman There was a wild streak in her cries And I found myself lost to this world As I entered Paradise The next day the storm was over I left for town to get my car It wasn’t quite finished yet So I took a walk to the local bar I asked the bartender if he knew Laura If she ever came in to town Did he know anything about her Did he ever see her around He said he only knew Of the stories that others told How her husband died in the Yukon Prospecting for gold How she cried when she got the news That he was never coming back again So she hung herself in that old house In the year of 1910.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/22/2011 12:02:00 PM
wonderful ghost story, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 6/21/2011 6:01:00 PM
Just dreamy, i love ghost lover stories! and this is a good one Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/21/2011 8:51:00 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Vince : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Vince. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:27:00 PM
this is sure a ghost tale all right. And a sexy one at tha (albeit sad too)t!! Congratulations, Vince.
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:03:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn, Vince
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:56:00 PM
Wow Vince. Some tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:20:00 PM
Congrats Vince on your second place win in the Ghosts contest with this wonderful write luv.. awesome piece and entry ..
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:18:00 PM
You got lucky! But no luck involved in your win..this is great. congrats. BG
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Date: 6/20/2011 3:17:00 PM
Dear Vince, congratulations on your second place in the Ghosts contest. Jack and I both loved your entry. We judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/29/2010 6:51:00 AM
WOW!!! This poem left me speechless!!
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Date: 8/10/2009 11:42:00 PM
Vince you ol dawg you - excellent poetry my dear friend a favorite of mine for sure - Got to ask - Did that really happen? I have heard stranger tales - thanks for your comment on my blog and all the friendship and support Vince, God Bless, YF4L, MJ
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Date: 8/4/2009 4:07:00 PM
Ooooooh .... spooky !! WOW, the imagery had me right there and the last two lines were dynamite !! Ready for primetime write here ... smile ...
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Date: 7/30/2009 7:02:00 PM
Vince, this haunting is spooky good!!! jim
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Date: 7/30/2009 6:54:00 PM
this is a awesome poem vince! Thanks for the kind words regarding bipolar, it has been hard lately. God bless Erin
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Date: 7/30/2009 4:21:00 AM
Funny ghost story. I like it. Sara
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Date: 7/30/2009 3:19:00 AM
Hi Vince, I am up for the challange too, but I am going out of town tomorrow. I won't return until Monday. I would enjoy doing a duo with you very much, but if you must choose someone else I understand. Maybe I can do one later. Love Sandra
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Date: 7/29/2009 6:40:00 PM
Vince. to soup mail some one. you go to one of their pieces 1 next to their name at the top is a thing that looks like an envelope. 2 click on that and you'll be soupmailing the poet. or i by clicking on My soup mail; over to the left. you can get your own mail. easy. jhl
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Date: 7/29/2009 2:43:00 PM
Vince, did i tell you that i nominated you and sandra hudson for the couples duo contest. well i am now. call sandra.
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:36:00 PM
wowser! good story!! Light & Love
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Date: 7/28/2009 9:42:00 AM
Vince this just gave me chills, EXCellent story teller you are my friend and the flow was perfect.
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Date: 7/27/2009 9:05:00 PM
chills--this is a very wonderful narrative, nicely written and I loved the ending :)
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Date: 7/27/2009 4:43:00 PM
Wow! a great story and you placed it in a poem. I learned a few pointers too. Enjoyed and have a great evening.
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Date: 7/27/2009 4:30:00 PM
Vince, excellent write Sir. Reading it was amazing, it was like watching a mini movie>>James
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Date: 7/27/2009 3:23:00 PM
Rod Serling lives again!! Creepy and fun...would make a great episode for Twilight Zone!
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