The Storm

The wind was howling and it was raining hard
My car had stalled on an old country road
Finding an old house in the darkness, I knocked
Asked to use her phone to have my car towed
She said It’s bad out there, my name is Laura
Please wait a second while I get the light
I live alone in this old house
I’d feel better if you spent the night
Later she came to my room
After dreams had filled my head
That longing in her deep green eyes
She crawled into my bed
She loved me like no other woman
There was a wild streak in her cries
And I found myself lost to this world
As I entered Paradise
The next day the storm was over
I left for town to get my car
It wasn’t quite finished yet
So I took a walk to the local bar
I asked the bartender if he knew Laura
If she ever came in to town
Did he know anything about her
Did he ever see her around
He said he only knew
Of the stories that others told
How her husband died in the Yukon
Prospecting for gold
How she cried when she got the news
That he was never coming back again
So she hung herself in that old house
In the year of 1910.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Roberts Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 12:02 PM
wonderful ghost story, congrats on your win in the contest
Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Just dreamy, i love ghost lover stories! and this is a good one Congrad's Light & Love
Horne Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Many congrats on your win in our contest, Vince : ) Carolyn and I loved your poem.
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's & Jack's "Ghosts" contest Vince. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 9:27 PM
this is sure a ghost tale all right. And a sexy one at tha (albeit sad too)t!! Congratulations, Vince.
Mehta Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:03 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carolyn, Vince
Johnson Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:56 PM
Wow Vince. Some tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Congrats Vince on your second place win in the Ghosts contest with this wonderful write luv.. awesome piece and entry ..
Gorelick Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 3:18 PM
You got lucky! But no luck involved in your win..this is great. congrats. BG
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June 20, 2011 at 3:17 PM
Dear Vince, congratulations on your second place in the Ghosts contest. Jack and I both loved your entry. We judged blindly and there were many good entries that did not place, so those who did should feel very proud. Love, Carolyn
Sullivan Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 6:51 AM
WOW!!! This poem left me speechless!!
Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 11:42 PM
Vince you ol dawg you - excellent poetry my dear friend a favorite of mine for sure - Got to ask - Did that really happen? I have heard stranger tales - thanks for your comment on my blog and all the friendship and support Vince, God Bless, YF4L, MJ
Mason Avatar
August 4, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Ooooooh .... spooky !! WOW, the imagery had me right there and the last two lines were dynamite !! Ready for primetime write here ... smile ...
Goff Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 7:02 PM
Vince, this haunting is spooky good!!! jim
Werner Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 6:54 PM
this is a awesome poem vince! Thanks for the kind words regarding bipolar, it has been hard lately. God bless Erin
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Funny ghost story. I like it. Sara
Hudson Avatar
July 30, 2009 at 3:19 AM
Hi Vince, I am up for the challange too, but I am going out of town tomorrow. I won't return until Monday. I would enjoy doing a duo with you very much, but if you must choose someone else I understand. Maybe I can do one later. Love Sandra
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July 29, 2009 at 6:40 PM
Vince. to soup mail some one. you go to one of their pieces 1 next to their name at the top is a thing that looks like an envelope. 2 click on that and you'll be soupmailing the poet. or i by clicking on My soup mail; over to the left. you can get your own mail. easy. jhl
Loving Iii Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 2:43 PM
Vince, did i tell you that i nominated you and sandra hudson for the couples duo contest. well i am now. call sandra.
Guzzi Avatar
July 29, 2009 at 1:36 PM
wowser! good story!! Light & Love
Bird Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 9:42 AM
Vince this just gave me chills, EXCellent story teller you are my friend and the flow was perfect.
K. Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 9:05 PM
chills--this is a very wonderful narrative, nicely written and I loved the ending :)
Burton Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 4:43 PM
Wow! a great story and you placed it in a poem. I learned a few pointers too. Enjoyed and have a great evening.
Fraser Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 4:30 PM
Vince, excellent write Sir. Reading it was amazing, it was like watching a mini movie>>James
Richards Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Rod Serling lives again!! Creepy and fun...would make a great episode for Twilight Zone!
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