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As I sit in my rocking chair, I must have fallen asleep. My bay window shows effects of the dark night, thick black clouds, no moon to shimmer over the far sea. Occasionally flashes of lightning lit the panorama in front of me. I was confused wondering if I was dreaming. For truly outside was a storm brewing. Suddenly rain fell, hitting the panes of my lovely bay window. I love the rhythm of the falling rain. Behind me, the fire crackled Sending its heat to warm me. No this was not a dream as I heard The sound of footsteps coming Up the stairs. My wife was late. Some emergency at the hospital no doubt. She bent low and kissed my forehead. I realized she was drenched in the rain. I urged her to have a hot shower. "Only if you wash my back," she laughed. I needed no second invitation. And let me assure you, my friends. This was not a dream. Fiction

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Date: 9/26/2023 5:57:00 AM
I love storms and fireplaces, Victor - the two together are doubly pleasurable. :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 2:28:00 PM
Victor, a steamy and stormy night.
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:05:00 PM
I felt like I was looking at a beautiful film. And felt the fire's comfort and warmth with a raging storm going on outside. And the deep love you and your wife will share forever. A poem full of different emotions, romance and passion. Brilliant.
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Date: 9/23/2023 10:35:00 AM
Oh wow, this morning write is sequined with vivid expressions and spellbinding imageries.. Your wordplay has created a whimsical and intriguing ambience for the reader.. The poetic skills are so brilliant here, beautifully done!
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Date: 9/23/2023 8:08:00 AM
Dear Victor, your vibrant imagery and emotion brings this lovely and loving scene to life. A dreamy romantic piece, so very soul-warming. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/22/2023 4:27:00 AM
Vivid imagery in your poem Victor.. expressed so poetically.
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Date: 9/21/2023 9:13:00 AM
Extremely good poem Victor. Best you have written in a long time. Very well written. Cheers SV
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Date: 9/20/2023 7:01:00 PM
Your such a great fantasizer and story teller, it all seems real to me, :)
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Date: 9/20/2023 7:21:00 AM
Reads like the perfect dream to me, but being reality makes it even better… Belle
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Date: 9/20/2023 12:14:00 AM
You are the mentor of poetry, loved this!
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Date: 9/19/2023 10:20:00 PM
You are a master in dreaming of romance. Being on a rocking chair and sleeping when it rains outside is a pleasing experience. Your wife's invitation is all the more pleasing. The contrast between the stormy ambiance and the sensational presence of your wife adds to the beauty of the poem.
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Date: 9/19/2023 3:51:00 PM
I love your story telling, it was a storm of all stormy nights, and love's delights, pure joy, dear Victor!
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Date: 9/19/2023 3:04:00 PM
very nice writing, storms can make happy, i guess, if there is someone with you, thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/19/2023 2:43:00 PM
Nice writing, Victor, your poem pulled me right into the room beside the bay window. You brought the poem to life with a cozy setting and lovely end to a stormy night. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill
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Date: 9/19/2023 12:12:00 PM
So touching! And, best of all, I felt I was with you, right next to you , Observing the sounds, the storm, the crackling fireplace. I like the . Intimacy of your poems, I can’t relate to worlds that do not exist. LOL..I am an earth woman for sure, Pangie xx
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Date: 9/19/2023 11:59:00 AM
Stormy nights sometimes have pleasant surprises, Very nicely penned Victor
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Date: 9/19/2023 11:57:00 AM
I liked the contrast between the wild weather outdoors, and the cozy, romantic scene inside. Wonderful writing, Victor. :)
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Date: 9/19/2023 10:58:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic lines penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
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Date: 9/19/2023 10:54:00 AM
Oh, how romantic a poem, Victor. I liked the tease in the ending.
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Date: 9/19/2023 9:59:00 AM
A beautiful reality... Ann
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Date: 9/19/2023 9:21:00 AM
great poem... Great imagination. Many blessings my friend
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Date: 9/19/2023 9:09:00 AM
you have always had a wonderful way of setting up a scene beautifully then going into the story within the scene, beautifully done my friend! hugs
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Date: 9/19/2023 6:51:00 AM
A mesmerizing poem, Victor, unravels the essence of a storm, blending dream-like bewilderment and profound love in a tapestry of exquisite beauty.
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Date: 9/19/2023 4:51:00 AM
You open a story to us…a lovely one! Pitter patter… Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 9/19/2023 3:27:00 AM
Lovely writing... dreams do come true. Lovely. God bless you, Love, Gina
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