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The Storm

As I sit in my rocking chair,
I must have fallen asleep.
My bay window shows effects
of the dark night, thick black clouds,
no moon to shimmer over the far sea.
Occasionally flashes of lightning
lit the panorama in front of me.

I was confused wondering
if I was dreaming. For truly
outside was a storm brewing.
Suddenly rain fell, hitting the panes
of my lovely bay window.
I love the rhythm of the falling rain.

Behind me, the fire crackled
Sending its heat to warm me.
No this was not a dream as I heard
The sound of footsteps coming
Up the stairs.   My wife was late.
Some emergency at the hospital no doubt.
She bent low and kissed my forehead.
I realized she was drenched in the rain.
I urged her to have a hot shower.
"Only if you wash my back," she laughed.
I needed no second invitation.
And let me assure you, my friends.
This was not a dream.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
September 26, 2023 at 5:57 AM
I love storms and fireplaces, Victor - the two together are doubly pleasurable. :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Victor, a steamy and stormy night.
Hawkins Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 9:05 PM
I felt like I was looking at a beautiful film. And felt the fire's comfort and warmth with a raging storm going on outside. And the deep love you and your wife will share forever. A poem full of different emotions, romance and passion. Brilliant.
Sharma  Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Oh wow, this morning write is sequined with vivid expressions and spellbinding imageries.. Your wordplay has created a whimsical and intriguing ambience for the reader.. The poetic skills are so brilliant here, beautifully done!
Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Dear Victor, your vibrant imagery and emotion brings this lovely and loving scene to life. A dreamy romantic piece, so very soul-warming. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
One Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:27 AM
Vivid imagery in your poem Victor.. expressed so poetically.
Volumes Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Extremely good poem Victor. Best you have written in a long time. Very well written. Cheers SV
Rose  Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Your such a great fantasizer and story teller, it all seems real to me, :)
Edmonds  Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Reads like the perfect dream to me, but being reality makes it even better… Belle
Vaso Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 12:14 AM
You are the mentor of poetry, loved this!
George Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 10:20 PM
You are a master in dreaming of romance. Being on a rocking chair and sleeping when it rains outside is a pleasing experience. Your wife's invitation is all the more pleasing. The contrast between the stormy ambiance and the sensational presence of your wife adds to the beauty of the poem.
Anaya Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 3:51 PM
I love your story telling, it was a storm of all stormy nights, and love's delights, pure joy, dear Victor!
Rolland Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 3:04 PM
very nice writing, storms can make happy, i guess, if there is someone with you, thanks for sharing
Baker Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Nice writing, Victor, your poem pulled me right into the room beside the bay window. You brought the poem to life with a cozy setting and lovely end to a stormy night. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friend. Bill
Romios Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 12:12 PM
So touching! And, best of all, I felt I was with you, right next to you , Observing the sounds, the storm, the crackling fireplace. I like the . Intimacy of your poems, I can’t relate to worlds that do not exist. LOL..I am an earth woman for sure, Pangie xx
May Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:59 AM
Stormy nights sometimes have pleasant surprises, Very nicely penned Victor
Buehler Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:57 AM
I liked the contrast between the wild weather outdoors, and the cozy, romantic scene inside. Wonderful writing, Victor. :)
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Ahh!! Romantic lines penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 10:54 AM
Oh, how romantic a poem, Victor. I liked the tease in the ending.
Foster Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 9:59 AM
A beautiful reality... Ann
Roper Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 9:21 AM
great poem... Great imagination. Many blessings my friend
Adams Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 9:09 AM
you have always had a wonderful way of setting up a scene beautifully then going into the story within the scene, beautifully done my friend! hugs
Poet Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 6:51 AM
A mesmerizing poem, Victor, unravels the essence of a storm, blending dream-like bewilderment and profound love in a tapestry of exquisite beauty.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 4:51 AM
You open a story to us…a lovely one! Pitter patter… Hugs ~ Kim
Mcintosh Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Lovely writing... dreams do come true. Lovely. God bless you, Love, Gina
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