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The Spider Who Changed Me

I used to hate insects until I met a small spider, he was living in my garden making his webs; that spider would skillfully traverse like a hang glider, I loved his lacy delicate garden cobwebs ! I found out that a spider is a good thing to have, so, I named him George and let him dwell among my blooms; some days it seemed he was hiding in a green cave, and from leaf to leaf sometimes he zooms ! But, one day it rained so much that George drowned, I was so sad and it was like loosing a real friend; hanging from his own destroyed cobweb he was found, I still think about George the spider and his sad end ! _________________________ January 18, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/The Spider Who Saved Me Copyright Protected, ID 01-1422-656 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Insects sponsor, Angela Tune, NA, Judged 01/20/2022

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Date: 1/19/2022 9:49:00 PM
This is such a cute, delicate write, great poetess! I too have now fallen in love with your spider and feel for him... :( :)
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2022 10:18:00 AM
Valsa, thanks for the compliment ~
Date: 1/19/2022 4:36:00 PM
Thanks for introducing us to your friend, George and poetically tells us of your sadness at his demise. Nice rhyming and well written, as usual. :-) Have a great week, Constance. Bill
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2022 10:19:00 AM
Bill, thanks for the compliment and the comment ~