The Snake Charmer

Fascinated people watch a cobra
swaying before them to the sound
of the snake charmer’s instruments.
He is deemed a hypnotist and a brave magician
to be able to mesmerize so dangerous a creature.
Using his special pipe -the pungi - 
he guides the snake in a magical dance.
Money is collected from an audience 
who feels they have witnessed enchantment.
The snake charmer has done his job,
but he did not charm any snakes.

Prior to his show,
his dangerous cobra had been torn
from its natural habitat.
Its fangs were ripped mercilessly
from the creature’s mouth -
a mouth which then was sewn almost entirely shut
so that no harm could ever befall
the “brave” magician!
As snakes have no real ability to hear,
the instruments in place present a grand illusion.
The dance is that of a terrorized reptile
swaying to avoid being struck by the pungi -
which it perceives to be a weapon.
Those not privy to these secrets have been duped.
The snake is anything but charmed.
Its awful death will be 
slow and certain.

Jan. 8, 2022
For the Snake Charmer Poetry Contest of Kai Michael Neumann
Used March 26 for 'A BRIAN STRAND 1097' Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/27/2022 9:29:00 PM
"Its awful death will be slow and certain" - Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/8/2022 9:29:00 AM
Oh, Andrea--I didn't know that. It is horrible. I think they are the "modern" snake charmers, because the one Krish wrote of sounded authentic--but who knows. People can be so cruel. Thanks for the information :)
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Date: 2/4/2022 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a sad write. Glad I am not a snake. Have a great/blessed day..................
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Date: 1/16/2022 6:29:00 AM
I was wondering where to go with this, you did it very well, Andrea. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 1/12/2022 1:02:00 AM
Andrea, you have torn open the secret behind the deceptive practice of the snake charmers and the details presented are true to every detail
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Date: 1/11/2022 2:42:00 PM
So sad that we exploit other beings for money in this way; very sad, but well crafted.
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Date: 1/11/2022 8:20:00 AM
Well it stands to reason Andrea, the grandstanders are normally not much on real Danger exposure I refused to by tickets to more Attractions at Florida marineworld I saw some Acts and I told my companions at the time I Felt a sadness from the mammals there.'
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Date: 1/11/2022 3:24:00 AM
How absolutely horrible. I was not aware of that this kind of cruelty was imposed for greed and sake of entertainment. Thank you for informing us of this cruelty. I have never been a fan of animal acts of any kind because I know that the animals are mistreated. My grandson has a pet snake and they actually have a cute personality which I’m sure many would not enjoy. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/10/2022 8:23:00 PM
Sadly, that’s how it is, as so astutely observed, Andrea. A thought provoking write indeed, good luck for the contest!
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Date: 1/9/2022 11:58:00 PM
That's a unique take on the theme, Andrea, wonder how many would take the side of the snake, but you surely have a kind heart:)
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Date: 1/9/2022 11:40:00 PM
How sad! "The dance is that of a terrorized reptile swaying to avoid being struck by the pungi - which it perceives to be a weapon." Ouch!
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Date: 1/9/2022 11:04:00 PM
It's always disheartening to learn of man's mistreatment of animals for monetary gain, entertainment, or sadistic pleasure.
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Date: 1/9/2022 11:20:00 AM
Well said and done, Andrea! Interesting how sideshow attractions slither into religion . . . . .
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Date: 1/9/2022 10:51:00 AM
So sad! Well written, good luck in the contest! Grace D
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Date: 1/9/2022 4:21:00 AM
Pitiful... I don't like snakes, but this is simply sad. God bless you for writing and letting us know these horrific facts. God bless you Andrea. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/9/2022 1:56:00 AM
Excellent factual write; good luck in the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:26:00 PM
That is an absolute evil thing the snake charmers do, they should be fined heavily and this kind of road show should be terminated. Did not know anything about this, thank you for bringing this to our attention. Congratulations my dear friend for being selected for Poetry Soups latest Anthology. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/8/2022 11:12:00 PM
Well I didn't know that Andrea, charmer my butt, more like a snake oil man lol. Tom
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Date: 1/8/2022 2:55:00 PM
Wow! I learned a lot. Love it. Now don't tell me Sabu did not really save that girl from the cobra, in the treasure pit. That had to be real! Kipling's "The Jungle Book", and every young boys first mystical enchantment -- 1942 film version. See it if you have not. Delightful!
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Date: 1/8/2022 1:55:00 PM
Seems you did some research. I have never been interested in such Asian phenomena. Hugs.
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Date: 1/8/2022 1:23:00 PM
Wow! I don't like snakes but that's just cruel. I had no idea this happened. A very informative write, Andrea! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/8/2022 12:47:00 PM
- Great for the contest, Andrea ... a scary animal ... good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2022 12:46:00 PM
Powerful, Andrea. Another tale of how we use animals for our own gain. Barry
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