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The Sleeping Village

From the woolly blanket of stygian gloom, Sun has emerged beaming garishly bright. Bees buzz around flowers that bloom. Between the twilight gloom and the golden light, Earth looks like a maiden, just woken up from sleep. Joggers are out for their routine walk in rising zest. The village lies quiet, slumbering deep, Unruffled by the noise of treading feet And the beams of light that have begun to peep Nowhere can we sense the pulse of throbbing beat. Shops remain shut, farmers are yet to rise. There is no traffic moving along the winding street. No hustle, no bustle , only vacancy greets the eyes. From this stupor, the village will rise up soon. The quiet will cease and business will come to seize. Life will spring back in fervour from its cocoon. This place will be abuzz with sounds by early noon! July.12. 2022 Five Stanza Terza Rima Poetry Contest Sponsor- L Milton Hankins

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Date: 7/15/2022 8:24:00 AM
The peace and quiet of the lovely night...then boom! Everything becomes so busy :) I like this Valsa. Good entry! Linda
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Date: 7/14/2022 10:17:00 AM
Very nicely penned Valsa, best wishes in the contest
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:37:00 AM
Well written Valsa. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:59:00 PM
Enjoyed - as I enjoy another peaceful before-dawn morning! Aloha!
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Date: 7/12/2022 12:14:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Valsa. I could see the sleepy village as the joggers came out. Nice contest entry, good luck my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/12/2022 6:03:00 AM
Enjoyed the walk through the glimpse of dawn traversing a quiet village. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 7/12/2022 4:52:00 AM
A poem that deserves to be called the epitome of poetic achievement, dearest Valsa! Be blessed
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Date: 7/12/2022 4:44:00 AM
Dear Valsa, you have written a poem that is both brilliant and beautiful. You maintain the reader's interest throughout the lines, keeping them longing for more of your elixir."No hustle, no bustle , only vacancy greets the eyes"."Life will spring back in fervour from its cocoon".lines that are encouraging and bring a renewed sense of vitality and drive. Best for a win
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Date: 7/12/2022 3:36:00 AM
Valsa, every line is a delight, every line is a masterpiece.
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Date: 7/12/2022 1:11:00 AM
Brilliant poem, dear Valsa. Enjoyed the translon from sleep to busy vendors.
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