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The peak sigh of the departing twilight. The bird's eyes shine with sheer delight. Waves of a slick tremble in open sight. Then climb into the azure sky's height. And turns into the joyful syllables write. I'm singing about the tawny moonlight. Stir up the hazy wishes of the soul site. Whispered hue of a gala calming night.
Written: May 29, 2022

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Date: 5/30/2022 6:30:00 AM
A lovely poem that rhymes beautifully Lasaad….really enjoyed…..Debx
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Date: 5/30/2022 6:05:00 AM
A lovely poem, Lasaad. Beautiful sights and sounds you convey in wonderful tone and flow.
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Date: 5/29/2022 10:52:00 PM
Great images and very serene.
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Date: 5/29/2022 10:23:00 PM
Indeed a calming night .... ! I like the "tawny' moon ! A unique image and a sweetly rhyming poem on a heavenly night !
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Date: 5/29/2022 8:46:00 PM
Nice flow, easy to read. Well written Monorhyme, Lasaad. Have a great week! Bill
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Date: 5/29/2022 7:55:00 PM
There's a great rhythmic beat to this one, Lasaad. Two thumbs up! ~ gw
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Date: 5/29/2022 3:21:00 PM
This is a great Monorhyme! Well written. I enjoyed this :)
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