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The Sex Was Great

The sex was great, but what of now You've moved on, off to another town Leaving me to think about all the possibilities Lost long ago along with La Nina These frigid walls still bleed your name And the lack of sleep craves me insane Liquid love found only lying on the floor with the worm When will I ever learn Digging six feet deeper one day too late Red rolls of silence alone the dying wait

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/20/2017 12:18:00 PM
Top of the afternoon Tim. Ok so I had to bite and read this entry. I can see we all had to (ha ha). I also agree it was somber. Always is it sad when a love fades or is lost. Well done and expressed.
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Date: 3/19/2017 1:22:00 PM
I can certainly feel the pain and loss in this write. Really well done!!
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Date: 3/18/2017 7:58:00 PM
The title was so good came back twice!
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Date: 3/18/2017 3:08:00 PM
Tequila sunrise... with that title you may set a weekend record for hits.
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Date: 3/18/2017 1:10:00 PM
There's a lot to be said about this poem... one intriguing sentence there. It's beautiful, and sad too.
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Date: 3/18/2017 10:51:00 AM
Wow. I'm with Arthur...that title made me click right away! It left me....wondering. Walls bleeding your name....love that line
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Date: 3/18/2017 10:29:00 AM
You know I couldn't resist a poem with that Title!! This poem is well, so well written, I can feel each line.
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Date: 3/18/2017 9:09:00 AM
Ouch! Hell of a love hangover, well penned :) 7 xomo!
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