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The Salted Leaf

Crystal sapphirine salted leaf, The forlorn friend of aqua rose. Memories of ages, only the leaf knows. Bright blue tears of eternal grief. The wedding bands confirm our love. Passion, ardent affection for life. I and Lenore forever my wife, Beautiful as a pure white dove. The eye of the rose reflects all, You see the past in a single glance. The aqua rose: Lenore, did me enhance. Away she flew, to kingdom hall. Why? Did she die; I do not know. Answers in the blue crystal salt, Sapphirine leaf will sorrow halt. I eat the leaf for status quo, My heartbeat quickens, then a smile. Lenore, my wife doth call me hither. Aqua rose begins to wither. The saga must continue. HGarvey Daniel Esquire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 11/21/2011 10:21:00 PM
Such amazing imagry. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/9/2010 9:49:00 AM
There are some truly beautiful lines in this poem, and it is ever so visual, "the eye of the rose reflects all" you have a gift... and thanks for the honor of 3rd place and thanks for all your wonderful comments ~~ soup mail in a moment
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Date: 11/1/2009 11:23:00 AM
Interesting toughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/26/2009 12:41:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week HG .Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:11:00 PM
Very intriguing write here HG and am I to assume it is a take on Poe? Hmmm ... it has a mysterious quality and is a great selection to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2009 1:13:00 PM
Congrats HG on your featured poem. Vince
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:32:00 PM
Congrats on this featured poetry. Enjoyed the read Ernilando
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Date: 7/20/2009 7:06:00 AM
this is a wonderful write, you are such an intelligent poet, one of the best brains here at the soup. please keep writing friend and congrats on your awesome piece bieng featured this week. great you HG! Adeleke
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Date: 7/20/2009 6:03:00 AM
HGarvey,..Awesome poetry my friend !! God bless you and congratulations on your featured write this week !! james
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:31:00 AM
a beautiful poem full of love and devotion congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you.
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:09:00 PM
This is a favorite of mine..congrats on being featured..all my love.. BG
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:00:00 PM
Yet your love lives on. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:36:00 PM
HG, Congratulations my forever friend on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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