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The Sagacity of Life

For I am departing tomorrow and the sun shall gleam, the eventide shall ascend and the moon shall beam. Forget me not when I wither away, yet please remind yourself that I am in heaven where the stars have aligned. I pray to all of you I have been charitable and kind. When you miss my voice may you take comfort in a dream. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love is the benevolence, and hope is faith given in unanimity, for conviction is a way of life lived with sincere harmony. May war find a truce and peace turn into unification, and consonance become a way of life’s God-given creation. Trust in all things that bring certitude and veneration. You may lose your way in approach, don’t forfeit your identity. Material items or wealth cannot confer joy in living, yet riches of the heart and soul are found in giving. Free yourself from greed and lust, be true to your essence, and in moments of mistake you must learn the convalescence. Purity in laughter awards a smile and quintessence. When injured by mankind may you teach to be forgiving. Proper health in our bodies can determine our existence. Acceptance is crucial, you must live without resistance. To all things that prosper your life, you must surrender, and free yourself from harsh words, speak words of tender. Approval is never something that you should render. Reach for the gates of heaven and travel the distance. Delight can be found in the laughter of a child, for they are living evidence you can be gently mild. Take comfort in your daughter’s embrace with gratitude, give her the space she needs when she has a poor attitude. You may find frustration in your son’s impeding mood, but never forget his sweet birth and the way you smiled. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This sagacity I have learned and shall pass it onto you. Remember the love we shared when your heart is blue. I regret not one thing while living on this beautiful earth, and I am full of gratitude for my marvelous birth. For I have lived a life full of compassion and self-worth... I pray that you find this prudence from my heart to be true. *I know this may be an epitaph, but this would definitely be my final poem on this earth and I want this to be read at my funeral* Rhyme Scheme: A-A-B-B-B-A My Muse, Mortal Poetry Contest Gregory Barden June 23, 2018

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Date: 8/24/2018 7:59:00 AM
This is I think one of your best ever Laura, I have to fave this to read over and over again. Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 8/23/2018 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your great win. The depth of the poem is wonderful.
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Date: 8/22/2018 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful and profound. Congratulations on your 2nd place win.
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Date: 8/22/2018 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Beautiful, profound.
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Date: 8/21/2018 8:36:00 AM
Legacy is the first word to come to mind swiftly followed by beautiful. Wonderfully done Laura Loo, congratulations on your win! xomo
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Date: 8/21/2018 2:40:00 AM
The legacy you leave just by the kind, sweet, gentle, caring, compassionate lady that you are will forever live on long after your life on earth is ended. That would be epitaph enough but what you wrote says what you feel and I know your request will be honored. Congratulations on you win in the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2018 2:26:00 AM
Deep and very beautiful Luloo! Congratulations on your deserving Second placement! : )
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Date: 8/21/2018 2:23:00 AM
This is so extraordinary, Luloo, with so many layers and moods, and a lot of work went into this, clearly. I was deeply touched and very impressed with your phrasing and storytelling, and ability to convey such deep feelings. Congratulations on your SECOND PLACE in the 'My Muse, Mortal' Poetry Contest - blessings, my friend! :-)
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Date: 6/26/2018 12:31:00 AM
Wonderful Laura. I admire. Each line of your poem deeply touched me. Love
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Date: 6/24/2018 5:48:00 PM
So much philosophy, but "epitaph?" As always wonderful reading and writing.
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Date: 6/24/2018 12:19:00 AM
Such lovely rhymes, Laura.. your pen carries skill!
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