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Moonshine at midnight, Star dazzles glowing, blessing my pathway, bearing musings stray, deep truce relating. Recall might saved, strong in my heart, strive to abide, being away. No more weeps, Wells run dry, Over time. I sweat, To plow. Rose.
Written: June 8, 2022 Diminished Hexaverse Contest Your Choice of Subject Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 6/14/2022 4:04:00 PM
Bless you and your soulful poetry, my friend Lasaad. Bill
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Date: 6/9/2022 3:50:00 PM
Hello Laassd, a very sad poem. Do not feel you have to hold back the tears. it is good to cry. Tears heals it is part of healing. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 6/9/2022 4:53:00 AM
Emotions well invoked--wells do run dry over time. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 6/8/2022 8:15:00 PM
"No more weeps, Wells run dry, Over time." In course of time wells run dry ! Tears also will get exhausted . Quite right, dear friend !
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Date: 6/8/2022 5:07:00 PM
well run dry... yes ... I feel that... so sad... Excellent poem. Ann
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Date: 6/8/2022 2:37:00 PM
Majestic! Just majestic, my friend, Lasaad! God be with you!
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