The Redwood Trees In My Forest

On a dusty and narrow path dwarfed by the enormous
redwood trees, which have conquered all of the soft-blue sky;
I walk and I'm astonished by the tallest of them all! 
Winter has left and the snows begin to melt away, to invite a lovely butterfly
to perch on wildflowers like aspens and mountain daisies swaying at the foothill;
and right beyond them, granite cliffs gloriously shine like those
northern mountains' peaks dabbed with spring snow;
oh, yesterday they were invisible to the blinking eye!



I stroll underneath groves of sequoia and white fir, and see myself really small;
and these giant trees encircling me, will lament how they shiver when they're cold,
and sad when battered by the storm; how they'll strive for lack of space and sunlight,
but wildfires may cause destruction and leave this forest barren and arid! I fix my glance
upward, and I start spinning and whirling in the stylish manner of an experienced dancer,
and they spin along with me, in a soft crescendo, never falling down with an awkward thud!  
I continue walking and admiring the majestic view of a creation, too inspiring and sublime,
which was hidden from these very eyes...to make their discovery more exciting and fun!



Who hasn't seen the redwood trees in my forest? Come along and satisfy your curiousity;
these trees have more stories to tell more than a victorious warrior galloping his horse away;
and for decades, they have seen greedy hands cut them down without regard or mercy...
depleting nature of its internal richness, and when it rains, floods corrode its terrain!
Imagine what the earth will become without any of these, adorning it with a variety of colors;
look closer, some of them are covered with thick lichen, others show a cinnamon, 
hard bark, so protect Nature with your best ability and be rewarded with amazing results!
A forest, which displays its wild and natural beauty, is a treasure like my redwood trees!    

Entered in Constance La France's contest, "A walk to remember" 

Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/23/2009 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrew, on your success in Constance’s “A Walk to Remember” contest. I have walked that walk before (in 2001 Sequoia National Park) and took my children with me. This heartfelt poem captures the grandeur. I am so glad that you placed. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/18/2009 1:32:00 PM
Oh My...I grew up in Humboldt Co, CA..amidst the giant redwoods. This poem made me get tears in my eyes..it took me home again. .Im so glad you got a win with this piece. BG
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Date: 10/18/2009 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/17/2009 7:06:00 AM
Dear Andrew, A wonderful Narrative. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:48:00 AM
Congrats on your success in the contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/16/2009 5:54:00 PM
I don't know how I missed this amazing poem the first time. So glad to see it here among the winning poems...it is wonderful! ~ Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:18:00 PM
Hi Andrew, congrats on your win! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:51:00 PM
Andrew, congratulations on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/13/2009 1:26:00 PM
Andrew, what an awesome sight these giant redwoods must be, to stand beside one Wow, do you stay close to where they grow primarily? I recall seeing a picture of an arch cut on one in a book when i was younger, with a car driving through it. Excellent piece, best of luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:23:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 10/1/2009 8:45:00 PM
Beautiful walk you took me to. Yes, I have seen those Redwood trees. You live in Northern California? Now, you make me want to go up there again. See, I live in the South. I appreciate this great write, brings back memories. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 10/1/2009 8:59:00 AM
Looking up at the giant redwood certainly can make us see ourselves as "really small," Andrew. And the moutains in the distance serve to enhance the feeling. I love the way you start "dancing" with nature; it is filled with the potential for powerful discoveries that bring joy to our lives. Beautiful write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/1/2009 6:55:00 AM
What a lovely walk you had Andrew. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you the best in Constance's contest should you enter it. Love, Carol
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