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On a dusty and narrow path dwarfed by the enormous redwood trees, which have conquered all of the soft-blue sky; I walk and I'm astonished by the tallest of them all! Winter has left and the snows begin to melt away, to invite a lovely butterfly to perch on wildflowers like aspens and mountain daisies swaying at the foothill; and right beyond them, granite cliffs gloriously shine like those northern mountains' peaks dabbed with spring snow; oh, yesterday they were invisible to the blinking eye! I stroll underneath groves of sequoia and white fir, and see myself really small; and these giant trees encircling me, will lament how they shiver when they're cold, and sad when battered by the storm; how they'll strive for lack of space and sunlight, but wildfires may cause destruction and leave this forest barren and arid! I fix my glance upward, and I start spinning and whirling in the stylish manner of an experienced dancer, and they spin along with me, in a soft crescendo, never falling down with an awkward thud! I continue walking and admiring the majestic view of a creation, too inspiring and sublime, which was hidden from these very eyes...to make their discovery more exciting and fun! Who hasn't seen the redwood trees in my forest? Come along and satisfy your curiousity; these trees have more stories to tell more than a victorious warrior galloping his horse away; and for decades, they have seen greedy hands cut them down without regard or mercy... depleting nature of its internal richness, and when it rains, floods corrode its terrain! Imagine what the earth will become without any of these, adorning it with a variety of colors; look closer, some of them are covered with thick lichen, others show a cinnamon, hard bark, so protect Nature with your best ability and be rewarded with amazing results! A forest, which displays its wild and natural beauty, is a treasure like my redwood trees! Entered in Constance La France's contest, "A walk to remember" Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci
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