The Raging Storm

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sea screams in the wind. causing waves to rise and fall. My hopes shifted too with a whole new kind of storm. Caring, yet sometimes ruthless. Written: December 08, 2021

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Valsa George

Date: 1/4/2022 8:02:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, this is a true tanka.... I am reading tanka more often these days to master this form better !

Lin Lane

Date: 12/10/2021 6:56:00 AM

Lasaad, your poem is as powerful as that oncoming storm. Nicely expressed.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2021 5:58:00 PM

Dear Lasaad, your golden pen spills a potent poem. I admire the tempestuous connection you captured between the waves’ rise and fall and the emotional rise and fall a person can experience. Fantastic imagery and insight, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/9/2021 6:51:00 AM

Very powerful and meaningful Tanka, my dear friend, Lasaad!God bless you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/9/2021 5:04:00 AM

A like how you weaved human emotions in the rise and fall of tides. Well done, Lasaad.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/9/2021 3:15:00 AM

Great imagery in this Tanka.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 12/8/2021 7:42:00 PM

Nature follows its own set of rules. Human emotions on the other hand may deviate, then simply lose control. Your poem awakens the senses. Well done!...ab