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The Prayer

The Prayer I bared my soul within warmth of thy hot flame needing comfort of lovingly sent relief. Knew thy gentle spirit yet not thy true name thy kindness came because of faithful belief. With tenderness in grace I had rarely seen healing angels were sent on thy sweet command. Heavy burdens gone, soul feeling so serene Thy light of lights caused me to soon understand. Now in prayer, forgiven heart gives its thanks for thy dear mercy granted this once lost soul. Only by faith's deep love do I join thy ranks what was once broken, thy love has now made whole. May thy mercy sweep through this dark, barren land. Thy saving grace rain down, much as we can stand. R.J. Lindley Feb 20th, 1977 Form- Sonnet Lin 11/11 Syllables Per Line: 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 Total # Syllables: 154 Total # Words: 120 Note - Edited today to bring syllable count into a consistent 11 syllables each and every verse.

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Date: 12/10/2016 6:56:00 AM
A wonderful prayer indeed, Robert. Thank you for sharing. Elaine
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:39:00 PM
7. Robert, surely such true heart feeling is a gift. Commend to us all a little such grace once in a while, and reading this today did that for me. Cheers, Doug.
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Date: 12/9/2016 11:30:00 AM
Not being a religious man myself, I suppose you could call me a heathen, still, I do appreciate a heavenly poem! Or heaven sent! And I'm afraid that I'm just going to add this to my Crane-Bag. (favourites) Do you prefer the ten or eleven-syllable sonnets?
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