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The Playground

I still recall the playground at my school. The bell for recess rang, and out we’d run. It was time to practice the Golden rule: choose teams and do fun things beneath the sun. We girls jumped rope; we all had to take turns. Sometimes I twirled the rope; sometimes I’d jump. We laughed and played and had no big concerns. We’d go on swings; our legs we’d have to pump to get us higher, higher to the sky. That jungle gym! Sometimes I’d catch a boy close by. Girls’ underwear he’d try to spy, for girls wore skirts in those day, but oh, what joy of simply being kids and so carefree. The best part of my school day – time of glee! June 20, 2021 For the Playground Poetry Contest of Shreya LN

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Date: 6/26/2021 5:04:00 PM
This is a hard kind of poem to write, in the sense that from an adult perspective, most of us without children don't have time for playground fun. You met the challenge very well. Another fun poem from you. Take care!
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Date: 6/23/2021 2:02:00 PM
Great, awesome poem my friend, and best wishes for the contest. I really felt as though I was back in my primary school days. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/23/2021 8:21:00 AM
Wonderful sonnet, skillfully composed, enthusiastic--nostalgia at its very best, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 6/23/2021 6:36:00 AM
I remember those days. There was fun and some accidents. Good one for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 6/22/2021 9:00:00 AM
Andrea, So it sings in this poem. In a playground's world of wonder. Perhaps where we learn to share. -Richard
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Date: 6/22/2021 7:57:00 AM
Those were the days, Andrea! You took me many years back when life was so much simpler (or so it seemed). I too preferred play to study and work :) ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/22/2021 5:35:00 AM
Recess was always fun, Lovely write Andrea.. soup mail
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Date: 6/21/2021 1:52:00 PM
For sure; we grow old too quickly. Love it! Well done, my friend!
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Date: 6/21/2021 1:23:00 PM
Hi Andrea, The school days on the playground were the good old days. This poem reminded me of why I loved being a kid and playground so much. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/21/2021 11:01:00 AM
My comments disappeared. A wonderful sonnet. You took me back to school days. In our school too we had skirts and boys would stand below staircase to spy girls underwear. For this reason, uniform was changed. In my son's school they have to wear leggings below skirt. Wonderful take on contest theme. All the best
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Date: 6/21/2021 7:59:00 AM
So Beautiful.
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Date: 6/21/2021 7:38:00 AM
This one made me smile, Andrea. It sure was fun to be a kid!
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Date: 6/21/2021 1:17:00 AM
Can't say we had a real playground after the war. Just a small patch with a ball made of torn clothes. Oh well, we had our fun in a way.
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Date: 6/20/2021 10:39:00 PM
A lovely upbeat poem, Andrea:)
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