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The Persons That We Are

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* inspired by Silent One's contest within each human soul a struggle lies- the battle waged between one's mind and heart relationships we're quick to analyze when strong emotions rip our world apart benevolence and kindness we extend to those whose lot in life seems bleak and grey (yet) malevolent and hurtful words we pen 'gainst enemies we feel must be repaid there was a time before the fall of man when all the world was nothing less than good in Eden's gardens wisdom ruled the land- the path to unity was understood until mankind returns from whence it came these conflicts will continue just the same

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Byeol Captain

Date: 2/28/2025 7:54:00 AM

A thoughtful one, that delves into human condition, reminding us of the importance of kindness and unity in overcoming struggles.

Tom Woody
Date: 2/28/2025 8:01:00 AM

True. Thank you

Alesia Leach

Date: 2/26/2025 2:47:00 PM

Your poem is thoughtful and explores the duality of human nature beautifully. It captures the inner struggle between kindness and malice, love and vengeance, wisdom and folly. The contrast between Eden’s harmony and humanity’s current state adds a compelling depth to the piece, reinforcing the idea that until we reclaim that lost purity, internal and external conflicts will persist.

Tom Woody
Date: 2/26/2025 4:10:00 PM

So sweet. Thx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/20/2024 6:28:00 PM

It was so nice to read your beautiful sonnet, Tom. How people treat each other is everything. Thank you for sharing. :)

Tom Woody
Date: 11/21/2024 5:35:00 AM

.muchos gracias Evelyn

Not Golden Silence

Date: 11/6/2024 4:15:00 AM

I like your sonnets. It's funny that we believe in the same thing. We both despise what going on in life! And I applaud you for that. A great sonnet was written with intuition

Tom Woody
Date: 11/6/2024 5:26:00 AM

Thx for support NGS

Valsa George

Date: 10/13/2024 9:02:00 PM

Man is on the horns of a dilemma. There is a constant battle going on in him between his mind and heart. He lives in a world of corruption, injustice and wickedness. The pristine beauty of the earth is lost.... all of it, his own make. Unless he goes back to the original grace that existed before the fall of man, we cannot hope to have a peaceful existence. Your wonderful sonnet lays before us, all these stark truths. Enjoyed reading, dear Tom.

Tom Woody
Date: 10/14/2024 5:27:00 AM

I believe we will someday. Good to see you back Valsa

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/4/2024 10:52:00 PM

A pen of pain..Wisdom lost' yet much to gain.) Well put piece.'

Tom Woody
Date: 10/5/2024 5:35:00 AM

Yessir and thx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2024 3:28:00 AM

A very relevant work about the fall of mankind. We are in the middle of the worst kind of repaying. Each side feels that they are in the right but both sides are wrong. It is a saga that has been going on and on since the beginning. Jesus will come again, and all will be healed but we don't know when. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Tom Woody
Date: 10/1/2024 5:34:00 AM

So true isn't it? Thx for stopping by

Robert Gorelick

Date: 9/29/2024 10:50:00 AM

I believe our evil natures aren't only due to The Fall, I believe it is also because our pure souls are encaged in the minds and bodies of primates. Just my take. Blaming women for The Fall, you and the Taliban have that in common.

Tom Woody
Date: 9/29/2024 12:26:00 PM

Is was just a joke Gorelick

Crystol Woods

Date: 9/29/2024 5:22:00 AM

Lovely poem of truth and hope! I enjoyed the rhyme and flow as well! Xo

Tom Woody
Date: 9/29/2024 12:26:00 PM

Thx ma'am

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/28/2024 12:23:00 PM

Hi Tom, mankind is so frustrated with life and living in this present era that exists, there is nowhere to hide and no-one to trust. How must we believe one politician when the next rejects and has a completely diverse opinion. Man has to think how will he buy the next loaf of bread for his family or will he have to pawn his wife's jewellery, and we all no matter color creed or nation pray to be saved who are the chosen persons? Poignant poetry, blessings Jennifer.

Tom Woody
Date: 9/28/2024 12:29:00 PM

Yes, our dual natures on full display. Thx again Jen

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/25/2024 12:32:00 PM

I loved reading your wonderful write. What a great picture. Too bad Eden's gardens had to change. Bet it was a wonderful place to live. Have a blessed/fun day writing away.............

Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2024 12:56:00 PM

Thx so much Paula. You're an inspiration to everyone

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/25/2024 7:04:00 AM

Tom, this read for me word by word & thought to thought, as a wise, learned, close to a perfect poem. Thank you for the content & excellence of you expression.

Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2024 9:21:00 AM

So kind of you to think so Sally

Laura Leiser

Date: 9/25/2024 6:56:00 AM

You illustrate humankind’s dilemma with sin nature well in your sonnet, Tom. Well done! :)

Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2024 9:20:00 AM

Thx much for visit

Regina Elliott

Date: 9/24/2024 5:22:00 PM

Hi Tom, and wars rage on. Your sonnet is so well penned and thoughtful. A FAV for me. Have a peaceful evening. ~

Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2024 6:44:00 AM

Faves rock. Thx so much

Gary Radice

Date: 9/23/2024 1:58:00 AM

Very interesting read. It ertainly got me thinking..We humans look for good when there is bad and sadly look for bad when there is good. My generalizations only. Your thoughts may differ. Cheers - Gary

Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2024 6:44:00 AM

Appreciate the visit

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/21/2024 1:32:00 PM

Pleasure reading tom

Tom Woody
Date: 9/21/2024 5:29:00 PM

Hey have we met? I'll have to stop your way. Thx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/21/2024 1:00:00 PM

Hello Tom, I fell a little behind this week on my reading so I stopped by to see your newest and I am glad I did. Your sonnet brought out the fall of man and his ongoing battles with great clarity. The Bible says this is Satans World and we will always struggle until Jesus returns. We have a world of distorted logic posed as truth and emotions that easily override all things holy. Well inked for the contest! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Tom Woody
Date: 9/21/2024 5:30:00 PM

Thx Daniel. I think I'll lay off the these spiritual themes for a bit. Don't want to overstay my welcome

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 9/21/2024 11:14:00 AM

dear Tom excellent sonnet. Blessing Tom

Tom Woody
Date: 9/21/2024 5:30:00 PM

Thx so much Mu

Len Gasun

Date: 9/21/2024 11:03:00 AM

So true my dear poet friend Tom. Pull of temptation is always on the air, and the best tool is reading and abiding the word from the bible and constant prayers. Well-done sonnet my dear poet. Thanks a lot for sharing and all the best in the contest. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Tom Woody
Date: 9/21/2024 5:31:00 PM

Muchos gracias

John Read

Date: 9/21/2024 9:09:00 AM

Following Stoic principles,is the right path to take.

Tom Woody
Date: 9/21/2024 5:31:00 PM

I'll stick with Jesus. Thx for stopping by

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/20/2024 12:45:00 PM

Yes..' Its oh so easy to slip..!! Down into it.) Whatever that it is..Revenge..indifference to Others jealousy fits of anger murder slander ..Yet all these pass (THE WORD OF THE LORD STANDS FOREVER) However.!

Tom Woody
Date: 9/20/2024 6:36:00 PM

Right on Joe!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2024 11:39:00 AM

when we take out jealousy and self entitlement, we all win...a precious, honest commentary, tom!

Tom Woody
Date: 9/20/2024 6:36:00 PM

Hey thx for checking out my latest sonnet

Anais Vionet

Date: 9/19/2024 12:02:00 PM

I liked your poem - as art - but there's an argument to be made for Eden's gardens being ruled by human ignorance - until someone - and I'm not out to dox anyone - ate the mango and, of course, blamed to closest available woman for his transgression. =]

Tom Woody
Date: 9/25/2024 6:46:00 AM

Well, Eve refused to skin and gut so there you have it

Arlo Parker
Date: 9/22/2024 11:14:00 PM

Eve and Adam were vegetarians; that says a lot.

Joe Maverick
Date: 9/21/2024 2:26:00 AM

Hmmm.? I think I see another Chink.? I shall in my clumsy Human manner, try putting it With others I have gatheted to See what can be seen? Not that I follow your main thrust Ansis Yet some words ignite thought?

Tom Woody
Date: 9/19/2024 12:05:00 PM

Well I think it's clear that women have been a problem from the beginning ;). Still, gotta have em

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/19/2024 5:47:00 AM

Tom, this is a remarkable poem, which I will make a favorite. There's a lot to think about our nature and our impacts on each other and our planet. Can ever have a peaceful and kind world? I'm thinking we need more poets and fewer war mongers, but how can we make that happen...I think you are on to something!

Tom Woody
Date: 9/19/2024 5:51:00 AM

There are and have been plenty of (word) battles right here on PS Duke. Like I mention to Brandy below, we all struggle to be consistently generous and kind. Thx for support

Valsa George

Date: 9/18/2024 8:55:00 PM

There is always a conflict between our mind and brain. There is an angel and a devil coexisting in man. When the angel shows kindness and compassion towards those who suffer, the devil in us use hurtful words against those we hate. This rift has started from the time of the fall of Adam. Let us hope that one day in future, we will be able to regain our pristine goodness. A great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Tom.

Tom Woody
Date: 9/19/2024 4:55:00 AM

You always get it just right Valsa. Thx for support