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The Paradox of Aging

The Paradox of Aging You gave me friends of my craving, Flashing through my life like shooting stars, Then gone, a trail of jet stream mist, Memories waiting to call. You gave me love most human, Flaming, flickering, dying, leaving, The ashes of its coals. And now You give me solitude, The lovely silence where we meet; The most precious gift of all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/21/2017 4:23:00 AM
The fast life comes and goes, and usually one is left with little to show for it. But age and experience are able to make up for it, as your last stanza goes to prove! #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2017 6:16:00 PM
being middle aged....i feel so engaged....i remember young years....wild times with my peers....i remember high school....you can say i was the smartest fool....i remember childhood....where i gained the moniker of misunderstood....but i remember Life most of all....and i will do my best to make sure that mine will never fall....awesome write sunlite....
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/20/2017 6:50:00 PM
Thank you, Eric. I see you speak "poem." Laughing.!
Date: 5/20/2017 12:51:00 PM
To save the best for last. A lovely poem to contemplate Sunlite. : )
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Date: 5/19/2017 11:54:00 PM
I enjoyed the word scenes you created, fthrough life's journey, Sunlite! Great poem. :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/20/2017 6:49:00 PM
I appreciate your noticing that, Laura. Thank you.
Date: 5/19/2017 6:00:00 AM
Beautifully done my friend
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/20/2017 6:48:00 PM
If I already thanked you, Chris, charge it up to ......?
Date: 5/18/2017 7:10:00 PM
Truth. Giving and taking away leaving us with quiet contemplation.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/20/2017 6:46:00 PM
Yes, when we have a stressful day, and they are fewer, being back home in quiet contemplation is delicious.
Date: 5/18/2017 6:58:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Sunlite, change is sometimes hard for some as we grow old. ~*
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/20/2017 6:45:00 PM
You are so right, Eve! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/18/2017 6:43:00 PM
Beautiful poem, It sounds like a happy life to me :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 5/20/2017 6:44:00 PM
So nice of you, Glen.

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