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The Old Guitarist, Picasso - A Duet by Lioness Onpaper and Di11y Da11y

The searing sun has long been a revolving revelation of angst,
repelling songs of the skies, sung by the strings of the wings.
Pallid, poised only by muscle memory - a compositional backdrop,
past the point of revival, yet something inside me still ticks.

A trembling truth that never drifts,
these broken blues: a silent shadow with loud hues.
The bones of me, tunelessly picked out,
until I'm the aching hollow of unamplified sound.

Where do breathing colors of me sleep,
when deadly nights of the air eclipse upon the web once woven by whispers?
Death just a dropped chin and averted eye,
the slow slump of a sinner's stagnant dirge plays out.

Let those cobalt stones cease writings from vicious veins,
where wilting roses dip their thorns in starry puddles with no name.
Now begging for exsanguination of my pain,
the measure of a man captured, still, in expired offerings of disdain.

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Date: 5/30/2025 12:25:00 PM
…the slow slump of a sinner's stagnant dirge plays out…Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/29/2025 5:36:00 AM
Dear Lioness and DD, I love your duet with the weight of sunburnt longing of unplayed strings. I feel the ghostly ache of the “aching hollow,” the cobalt sorrow, the way pain is both music and silence. Your words so well inked suffering as art, something raw, blue, and honest. I see you both, trembling and true, crafting beauty from brokenness. Congrats on POTD. Spring Blessings, My Dear Duet, Daniel
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:04:00 PM
Wow, what talent in this poem, you wield a mighty pen. I see why it has been so honored with POTD, congratulations!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 11:19:00 PM
Thank u … this wouldn’t have been possible if not for this amazing poet and the support of our fellow artists enjoying our duet
Date: 5/28/2025 7:24:00 PM
' songs of the skies, sung by the strings of the wings. ' So captivating, yet soft and poetic. While tender emotions linger within, those filled with melancholy, this thought whispers hope. I find guitar music so romantic. Congratulations Lioness and Dilly, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 11:16:00 PM
Thank u for visiting our duet … she is a marvelous poet…
Date: 5/28/2025 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! An incredible duet. Thanks for sharing!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 11:15:00 PM
Thank you … glad u enjoyed it
Date: 5/28/2025 10:48:00 AM
"The bones of me, tunelessly picked out" " Death just a dropped chin and averted eye," very raw and beautiful
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 11:14:00 PM
I love that line too … it’s from the wonderful dilly dally … she is an amazing poet …
Date: 5/28/2025 10:46:00 AM
Hello Miss Lioness, a smashing collaboration, Congratulations on POTD! "deadly nights of the air eclipse upon the web once woven by whispers" brilliant! Bravisimo. Enjoy your day ~ I Am Anaya
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 11:12:00 PM
Awwn thank u .. so happy u enjoyed it …
Date: 5/28/2025 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations Lioness and Di11y Da11y on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day with your win...............
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 11:13:00 PM
Thank u so much .. so glad u liked our duet ..
Date: 5/28/2025 9:17:00 AM
Oh yas papi! Congratulations on your well deserved potd! Im thrilled for you! And also dd! What an amazing collab! Im happy to see you featured and i see you are responding to comments too, good job!! You should definitely post here more often. Sending you light always
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 9:36:00 AM
Hahahah … thank u papi.. for ur constant support… I trying … hahah my brain is fried aeee XD
Date: 5/28/2025 7:23:00 AM
Lioness and DD, a great collaboration. Congratulations on POTD.
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you … she is an amazing poet to work with
Date: 5/28/2025 6:05:00 AM
Enjoy your day in full sun
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 7:45:00 AM
Thank you tom .. rite back at ya.. :)
Date: 5/28/2025 5:53:00 AM
Congratulations to you both,Lioness And Dilly on winning POTD with your beautiful poem. Wishing you a wonderful day as you celebrate.
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 8:48:00 AM
Thank you … happy you enjoyed our collab
Date: 5/28/2025 5:41:00 AM
A lovely Ekphrasis duet, congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 8:49:00 AM
Thank you … a wonderful poet I got to do a duet with indeed ..
Date: 5/28/2025 2:24:00 AM
- "deadly nights of the air eclipse upon the web once woven by whispers" ... my favorite line - A wonderful poem .... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 8:50:00 AM
Thank you.. glad you enjoyed it <3
Date: 5/28/2025 12:43:00 AM
“Let those cobalt stones cease writings from vicious veins, where wilting roses dip their thorns in starry puddles with no name. Now begging for exsanguination of my pain, the measure of a man captured, still, in expired offerings of disdain.“ Beautiful collaboration with great imagery and depiction of pain in a challenging format! Congratulations to you both for potd!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/28/2025 1:30:00 AM
Thank you <3
Date: 5/27/2025 7:17:00 AM
Lioness, there are no better words I could choose other than those I used to comment on Dilly's post of your collaboration..."that trembling truth that never drifts is man's way of offering disdain upon himself. If there is a conscious, there is pain by which it can be measured. Blue, the color of the shame, captured by both of you."
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/27/2025 8:09:00 AM
Awwn thank you .. I’m glad you enjoyed our collaboration.
Date: 5/27/2025 12:54:00 AM
Ah Picasso!! I absolutely love this collaboration by two poets with an artistic mindset, and this is one of those art pieces iv always found so very inspiring and interesting from his blue period. You both did an exquisite and brilliant job, painting a very poignant and picturesque ambience that is fitting for the artwork! I especially love the lines "Where do breathing colors of me sleep, when deadly nights of the air eclipse upon the web" and "The bones of me, tunelessly picked out, until I'm~ and also the last stanza! The way youv used poetic techniques such as alliterations and metaphors here is truly so captivating! A fave this is for me! I love love this! Sending you both light!
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/27/2025 1:02:00 AM
Aaah yess papi!!! U chose one of mine n one of her’s… I like this poet … she has very interesting ways of expressing!!! I like a lil coco in creativity…
Date: 5/27/2025 12:49:00 AM
Nice … interesting choice . I have a passion for guitar . But it’s a very emotive subject .
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Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/28/2025 7:14:00 PM
@Tom, your thoughts bring a smile. :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/28/2025 6:05:00 AM
Me too! Write a song and enter it in my audio contest :)
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Lioness Onpaper
Date: 5/27/2025 1:02:00 AM
I would love for you to play guitar for me one day aeee

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