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The New You

A Poem About Dementia ~~~~ What lies behind your eyes I really wish l knew How are your thoughts now formed What it is like from your altered minds view Have you surrendered to your new normal Or does confusion and frustration reign Do you understand you are different now Do you despise this unfamiliar brain So many questions with no answers Sadly that will never be known I truly hope you have found peace In your unfamiliar, befuddled mind that roams

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Bill Baker

Date: 12/28/2023 5:33:00 PM

A FAV for my list, Deb. Well written poem, my dear friend. Your descriptions of what it must be like are amazing. The questions were just as I'd imagine a person wondering about. Thanks for sharing such a heartfelt and touching poem with us. May you have a great 2024, my friend.

Deb M
Date: 12/29/2023 9:41:00 AM

A Fav from you “Bill Baker Mr Wise my Texan buddy” is honestly very special for me! Thankyou so much! Your Aussie Buddy….Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/28/2023 1:48:00 PM

A wonderful write/story yet very sad. Love It... We have a couple of friends with this. Guess it comes with age for some... "Happy New Year 2024" .................

Deb M
Date: 12/29/2023 9:39:00 AM

Thankyou lovely Paula….you are always so kind with your comments and l appreciate that! Debx

Ink Empress

Date: 12/28/2023 3:16:00 AM

Ive been through this dear deb, one o my loved ones someone in my family went through a very hard breakdown, basically psychosis and mania, and it was one of the hardest thing to ever witness and go through, its even harder for loved ones as we have to adjust to their new normal. Well they are ok now, but still that feeling i can never forget and this poem reminded me of that. I feel this so deeply. A fave for sure for me. Sending you light always

Deb M
Date: 12/28/2023 5:30:00 AM

Im sorry to hear that Ink and l understand and know that feeling that horrible horrible sinking fearful feeling! Thankyou sweet Ink…..Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/27/2023 8:09:00 PM

Ouch. This one hurts... Some of my best friends have succumbed lately... Truth be told, I feel that it's started to creep up on me as well. C'est la vie, as Shirley H. might tell me. Happy 2024, Deb.

Deb M
Date: 12/28/2023 1:18:00 AM

Sad state of affairs isn't it BB……life can be hard! Thanks ….Debx

Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 5:35:00 PM

Very powerful. A clear picture of dementia, and the rhyme was deep and worked well! Thank you for your kind words on my POTD! I have been away for the holidays; am getting to everyone now. Just me! <3

Deb M
Date: 12/28/2023 1:17:00 AM

Thankyou Paige …..Debx

Silent One

Date: 12/27/2023 11:58:00 AM

I posted a poem on here about my experience with dementia, it is called the D word.. if you have time and wish to read it, it would be my honour..

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 12:19:00 PM

Just read it SO….the whole story and poem so very beautiful and touching! I left a comment….Debx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/27/2023 6:45:00 AM

Your poem gives them a voice, Deb. So very meaningful and thoughtful!

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 8:37:00 AM

Awww thanks Vijay! Debx

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 12/27/2023 1:50:00 AM

We're struggling with dementia with a family member, I too winder what's happening in there, very Jeckyl and Hyde I think, tragic and intriguing at the same time

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 1:57:00 AM

I agree Clive…a cruel and very sad illness! Debx

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/26/2023 6:55:00 PM

Sigh, this is a very emotional poem which reflecta the daily struggle of people suffering with this condition.. I know a close relative who unfortunately, has dementia..my own maternal grandma.. The emotions of turmoil and vulnerability are so turbulent in your lines.. So poignantly you've conveyed the state of their 'unfamiliar brain'..Also, in other ways, this poem also speaks about those who have a 'befuddled mind' and not a glimpse of clarity in their eyes.. Quite a creative and deep write.

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 8:37:00 AM

Thankyou for such a lovely comment my sweet friend! Its extremely hard on the loved ones dealing with a person that they love that has this illness….so sad! Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/26/2023 5:03:00 PM

I encounter many a befuddled person and wonder 'what the heck?" Back in my teaching days, many of my students were out there somewhere...ha, enjoyed your poem, hugs, Sara

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 8:33:00 AM

Thanks Sara…Debx

Lin Lane

Date: 12/26/2023 4:49:00 PM

For some people, I wonder where, somewhere along the way they traded their sense of normality for a befuddled mind. Don’t look into those eyes or try to comprehend. It’s a useless cause.

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 8:33:00 AM

Thanks Lin…lDebx

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2023 3:46:00 PM

I know people who suffer from this and its an awful condition...you described it well Deb..

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 8:32:00 AM

It is indeed SO…..thanks Debx

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 12/26/2023 3:37:00 PM

This compassionate Poem struck a chord with me, Deb. I have two adult children who have Schizophrenia and struggle with this misunderstood. Unforgiving, disease. Every day is a challenge that they face alone. My heart breaks for all who are afflicted with anxiety or mental health of any kind. It can break up families. Great write, Deb. Shirley XX

Deb M
Date: 12/27/2023 8:32:00 AM

Such sadness Shirley…cuddles my friend! Debx