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The Moonbeam Music

The cold sun sets after blazing the firmament, the dust of the dying day settles in the hazy horizon, the birds return to their nest deserting the sunken sky. As the grey grains of the gloomy night descend through the drowsy dusk of my life the clouds of despair drift in the mind. In its shadow as I wait for the distant dawn I see the maroon moon rise, turn into silver slice. The moondusts spread cerulean serenity in the air where freed from the sullen darkness my mind floats on demure dreams. The mystic moonbeams shimmer in the serenading soul, compose a new music of life in the rhythm of ecstasy. August 2, 2018.

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/12/2018 4:17:00 PM

Hi Subimal, dropping by with my congratulations on this well deserved piece. have a wonderful Tuesday....Mike.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/11/2018 7:23:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Subimal. Well done.

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/2/2018 6:54:00 PM

Simple superb in beautiful and thoughtful imagery; 'through the drowsy dusk of my life the clouds of despair drift in the mind.' Such exquisite emotion is conveyed in your lovely poem, Subimal. Congratulations on your excellent win.. ~Susan

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/3/2018 4:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan. Your comments are overwhelming and so encouraging.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/1/2018 11:20:00 AM

Congrats Subimal on another fine write and win!

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/3/2018 4:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, John.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2018 6:38:00 PM

A very lovely song celebrating the enchantment of dear Luna, Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/19/2018 12:34:00 AM

Thank you, Connie.

Craig Cornish

Date: 8/18/2018 2:14:00 PM

Hi my Dear poetess this is very fine writing and you used alliteration very often. My only caution would be to use it as an accent and not a sole vehicle to carry your thoughts - sort of like the best sexy outfit is what you "don't" show. Be sneaky with your tools, you are learning very quickly and growing with your skills. Mix them all well, and not too much of any in the same pot. This would have been much higher otherwise.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/19/2018 12:33:00 AM

Thank you, Craig for your well-taken suggestion. Btw, I'm a poet.