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Lilac lavender leaves fluttered ethereally over the smooth sea of the placid lake. A shimmer of light shone over the calm waves, as they rolled silently and collectively towards the sandy shore now lit by the rising of the amber full moon. Wave after wave composed a lyrical enchanting melody played by the rising orb. The leaves formed fragrant shapes emulating the grandness of the scene. In the gathering darkness two lovers heard the alluring symphony and felt each other entwined in a dance of love as the moon in a dreamy crescendo shone brightly evermore. Until the eclipse took place. Then it hummed no more that night.

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Date: 12/11/2022 9:14:00 PM
Excellent imagery, Victor, congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 12/11/2022 3:43:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Victor, very romantic too. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 12/10/2022 4:21:00 AM
The eclipse of the moon. Whoa!! Did the lovers cause the eclipse? I enjoyed reding this descriptive and passionate work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Congratulations on your work being POTD. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 12/10/2022 3:47:00 AM
Hello Victor. Congratulations on POTD. I can see how your entry has won the honor. Your work continues to be amazing. Truly. Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings always. PS. Your pen always shines. (smile)
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Date: 12/9/2022 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/9/2022 1:00:00 AM
This is beautiful! Wow what a great POTD.
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Date: 12/9/2022 12:17:00 AM
Enchantment, Victor. POTD to be sure. ~;o]
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Date: 12/8/2022 5:59:00 PM
Wow, the imagery on this was spectacular!
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Date: 12/8/2022 5:53:00 PM
"A shimmer of light shone over the calm waves, emulating the grandness of the scene." The soft glow of the moon certainly creates a romantic mood. This is so beautiful and dreamy. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Victor! Suttle and romantic, rustic, and Elysian in utopia. Robert
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:20:00 PM
congrats on your POTD dear friend,
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Date: 12/8/2022 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Victor! Enjoy your special day my friend. Bill
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Date: 12/8/2022 1:26:00 PM
Victor, a lovely poem and imagery, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/8/2022 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations Victor on POTD….Debx
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Date: 12/8/2022 12:58:00 PM
a moonscape of luxury, insert: the lovers! Congratulations on your Poem Of The Day, Victor!!!!!
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Date: 12/8/2022 12:14:00 PM
Lovely pen Victor with good imagery and expression. Congrats on the POTD, blessings,Gordon
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Date: 12/8/2022 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD with this great write.
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Date: 12/8/2022 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations for this beautiful POTD :)
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Date: 12/8/2022 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Victor. A beautiful, romantic poem with "a lyrical enchanting melody"! Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations, Victor, on your P.O.T.D.
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:58:00 AM
I am back with congratulations on POTD. Great work, my friend. Evelyn
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:45:00 AM
A perfect romantic scene flows from your words. Who could resist falling in love. Congratulations on POTD. SuZ
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Date: 12/8/2022 7:05:00 AM
Victor . Your words held me in their beautiful embrace basking in the melody of the moon . I love this ethereal write . Congratulations on POTD ! Big hugs and all blessings to you my friend . Susan :)
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Date: 12/8/2022 6:12:00 AM
Very romantic and vivid Victor! You set the scene perfectly. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Date: 12/8/2022 5:44:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Victor. Enjoy your day.
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