The Mirror of the Lake

Shy autumn first appeared in scarlet blush
to kiss the silent mirror of the lake
as umber shadows gathered in the hush
of amber afternoon and rose to take

the waning glow of summer into night.
The ginger leaves of maples echo still
a decoupage of August's blazing light
that spread like flames upon the cresting hill

then downward to the water's gleaming run.
They spill upon the glass like lava sear
amidst a mist of steaming cinnamon,
the saffron embers whispers in the ear

of pilgrim day to one last journey make
to view its image mirrored in the lake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
Ashley Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Dear Dale, the beauty of your artistry never fails to amaze me. Your exquisite colorful pen paints imagery like no other. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Thanks very much, Susan. Lovely to hear from you.
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Thanks very much, Susan. Lovely to hear from you.
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 11:13 AM
so good to read this gem again Dale, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Thanks, Jan. You're such a good friend.
Kauffman Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 11:04 AM
So colorful, so visual with a wonderful surprise ending, Dale - the changing of the seasons in visceral imagery! Congratulations on your win.
Y. Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Hi Dale, Congratulations on your winning write:-)Alexis
Hankins Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 9:06 AM
Dale, I am so happy that, out of 50 submissions, your poem placed high in my contest. Congratulations.
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Thanks very much, sir.
Devonshire Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:02 PM
A beautiful image of the colors on a glassy lake, Dale. When water is this calm, you can take a photo of the trees and the lake, turn it upside down and see the same image. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!
Cozart Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thanks so much, Carolyn.
Ibeh Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 8:06 AM
A really beautiful sonnet, Dale!:-) Congratulations on your win!
Cozart Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Thank you, Edward.
Krampe Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:15 PM
Your sonnet paints a lovely picture, Dale. Congrats on your placement.
Cozart Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 8:51 AM
Beautiful sonnet Dale, elegantly penned. Congratulations on your win :) xomo
Cozart Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 9:28 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen.
May Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Congrats on your win Dale
Cozart Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 4:08 PM
Thanks.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 11:56 PM
Congratulation on you win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Thanks very much.
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Wonderful writing Dale, no wonder you've got such a high placement, I would have put it at 2 or 3, but judging is subjective, well done!
Cozart Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Thanks so much, John.
Barden Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Very creative and such gorgeous imagery, Dale, I just adore this one! Blessings and congrats on your win, my friend! :-)
La France Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Dale, congratulations on your win with this amazing and beautifully penned write !
Cozart Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Thanks so much!
Cresswell Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Reading this is as if I am standing in a tapestry each colour moving in a zephyr as if alive, sentient, teasing my thoughts.
Cozart Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Thanks so much, Patricia!
Canerdy Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Lovely sonnet, Dale. Congrats! Janice
Cozart Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 12:10 PM
Thanks, Janice!
Babbit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:57 AM
What a beautiful reflection, good luck in the contest.
Cozart Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:59 AM
Thanks so much, DM.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 6:29 PM
I like the way the water is calm a reflection of the trees and grass can be seen. Have a nice evening my friend.
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 2:51 PM
oh ok clever clogs you could enter your own contest with this one lol , seriously dale a stunning sonnet with beautiful imagery:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
September 21, 2017 at 2:55 PM
Thanks so much, Jan!!
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