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The Maturation of Soulful Thoughts

Buried in the depths of my soul is the unrealized hope of a full explanation Covered over by shovels full of doubt and thoughts regressed Brilliance which lost its edge from lack of use lies in a state of degradation Can hope with its own will stir once again the creative mind Bringing forth seeds of thoughts that demand to be expressed That they may be embellished by those holding thoughts of a like kind This is the essence of my life’s revelation To expose those soulful thoughts, that all may be blessed Luring thoughts that deserve our full admiration To put them in rhyme I’m often inclined For me it’s the medium that seems to be best Alloying a rhythm to be intertwined No matter the depth of their foundation The soulful thoughts will evolve on their quest Fulfilling the purpose of their creation

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Valsa George

Date: 11/22/2023 3:39:00 AM

Beautiful seeds of thoughts are strewn around ! They will germinate in course of time and will yield good results. Your innate desire to express soulful thoughts for the enjoyment of everyone is much appreciated. "To put them in rhyme I’m often inclined For me it’s the medium that seems to be best" You are so very right and I always enjoy your rhyming verse, dear Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 11/22/2023 4:53:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comment, my dear friend. Rhyming is the easiest part of writing poetry for me. I think I should have written advertising slogans or jingles as a job. LOL Have a pleasant week, Valsa. Hugs, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/21/2023 4:16:00 PM

Bill, As I delve into the complexities of your work, I am tremendously astonished and filled with happiness. Your ability to apply brief words to explain your ideas and build your poetry genuinely brings things to life. Appreciate your wishes, and on my side, I wish you and Sara a very happy Thanksgiving and holiday season

Bill Baker
Date: 11/22/2023 4:55:00 PM

Thanks for the comments and the Thanksgiving wishes my dear friend. We'll be celebrating, just the two of us this year. As long as I'm blessed with Sara's presence, I'll not complain. Peace be with you, Bill

Judy Ball

Date: 11/21/2023 4:15:00 PM

Bill you never fail to impress with your deep thought and wisdom. Loved every word. I like a poem that says something and imparts a message. You do both eloquently. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB

Bill Baker
Date: 11/22/2023 4:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for the encouraging words, Judy. I tend to get a little too serious at times, but I mix a Limerick and light poem in to add variety to my offerings. thanks for the blessings, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill

Silent One

Date: 11/21/2023 2:12:00 PM

You and Sara are definitely the power poetic couple who both write so proficiently and actively support other poets on this community... I soul talks all the time, yet some do not hear it or just ignore it.. our soul is silent, but needs to come alive and this is done by poetry which helps us express the images our mind creates.. you do this perfectly and are always wise and poetic. You and Sara are a true blessing to this community... long may your pens continue to bless us..

Bill Baker
Date: 11/22/2023 5:04:00 PM

We really appreciate your poetry, Silent One, and your words are an ointment to our souls. You're a very special person, my friend, your presence has a unifying effect on our community. Thanks for all the encouragement you share through your poetry and comments. Poetry Soup is not the same when you're not around. Peace be with you, Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 11/21/2023 9:31:00 AM

Another poem that depicts your philanthropic soul and how willing you are to convey your soulful thoughts in anyway you can. I agree sometimes we write in hopes of letting our thoughts reach one that can resonate. I alwys enjoy reading you and this is no exception. I especially loved “ This is the essence of my life’s revelation To expose those soulful thoughts, that all may be blessed“ how beautiful is that! You an sara are such kind selfless and generous souls. Stay blessed always

Bill Baker
Date: 11/21/2023 2:00:00 PM

My heart always smiles when you mention Sara and me together. It changed my enjoyment of being a poet when Sara decided to try poetry back in July. I knew she would catch on quickly because I've always admired her writings. You have been a blessing to us both, Ink. May the joy and light you share with others return to light your path. Hugs, Bill & Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 11/18/2023 6:46:00 PM

I'm always so grateful to you for sharing all your soulful thoughts oozing with charm through your superb poetry my dear poet friend Bill. I'm always loving and enjoying the read and learning a lot from you. Your poems always grace and bless my day. You're one of my faves here. More blessings and power to you and your writings. Hugs

Bill Baker
Date: 11/18/2023 8:33:00 PM

Thank you for all the kind comments, my friend. I enjoy reading your poetry also. Smiles ~ Blessings Sawadee, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/18/2023 4:40:00 AM

a wise and mindful poem, dear hubby. You're right, soulful thoughts come from our authentic selves and need to be expressed. I'm grateful you chose poetry to share the soulful thoughts and words that come to you. The sharing is your quest, "no matter how hopeless, no matter how far" it seems at time. You're my personal Don Quixote. Hugs from me to you!

Bill Baker
Date: 11/18/2023 4:23:00 PM

See you soon, got two more of them dang windmills to take care of! You're my favorite! :-) Bill

Karen Jones

Date: 11/17/2023 11:12:00 PM

This is so deep that I don't have adequate words to express the forming of self actualization one receives in reading this as well as in creating. Thanks for sharing once again your wisdom dear Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 11/18/2023 4:24:00 PM

You are so kind with your comments, Karen. I glad we met here at Poetry Soup, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

David Fisher

Date: 11/17/2023 4:14:00 PM

Bill, am very impressed, and delighted while reading of the details you pay attention to, as in using such concise words when making your points. Such basic words give your thoughts and poem life; such as shovels full, seeds of thoughts, and depth of foundation. Enjoyed your poem!

Bill Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 4:21:00 PM

Thanks for the detailed comment, my friend. I appreciate your attention to detail. Have a pleasant weekend, David. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 11/17/2023 3:50:00 PM

Deep writing, Bill. I liked the last part a lot.

Bill Baker
Date: 11/17/2023 4:23:00 PM

Thank you, Paige, for reading and commenting on my poetry. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill