The Man Is Moonlighting

Once a month Earth’s moon takes another gig
     Moonlighting in a far-off galaxy
The lunar eclipse only veils the truth
     The man in the moon is an absentee

Decades peering down, he needs some relief
     He’s seen famine, wars and catastrophes
His face now pocked by craters of despair
     His other world? Fewer calamities!

He’s often afraid to show his full face
     So he waxes and wanes in synchrony
Slivers sometimes, half globes make their debuts
     Full orb appears with lovers’ harmony

Contrary to most popular beliefs
     Werewolves do not gain power from his light
The man in the moon beams with a full grin
     When we follow a path righteous and bright 

This is the reason we see harvest moons
     At times when we reap the best seeds we’ve sewn
The man who watches us is happy then
     Bright orange smile -- appreciation shown
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Hi Carolyn :) Super congrats on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest-- knew this would be a winner :) thanks as well for always dropping by my poems, sure do appreciate it :) enjoy your day! -- nikko :)
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Carolyn Warm congratulations to you on your great win with this worthy entry for the contest! I've learned quite a bit from your poem! Thanks! Love, Audrey
Mannan Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 11:20 PM
A beautiful meaning of harvest moon dear Carolyn. Many congratulations on this win.
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:22 PM
I think I'd missed seeing this sweet poem of yours somehow. It has some clever ideas in it, Carolyn. Congratulations!! Luv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Really nice imaginative poem about the man in the moon. Congratulations Carolyn. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 6:32 PM
Congratulations on an excellent precept pardner! Smile. I love your ideal for your brilliant personification poem, Carloyn. Agape, Moses
Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 4:25 PM
The first line does it for me, brilliance. Good luck in Deborah's contest >> James
K. Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Wonderful poem you wrote here, Carolyn :)-- really enjoyed getting to know what the Man on the Moon is up to-- liked your title for this one too! just a typo for "sown" -- hope this helps :) wish you the best in the contest! --nikko :)
Haick Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 9:06 PM
Wow! I love this..Wishing you good luck in Deb's "Harvest Moon" Contest, Carolyn...Love, Audrey
Neels Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Carolyn, I love the last stanza of your write. Welcome back ;) Best of luck for Deborah's Contest, love Wilma
Mannan Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 2:06 AM
A great poem for Deborah's contest. All the very best and thanks for the comments.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 11:20 PM
Carolyn, this is a really lovely entry for Debbie's contest and is sure to do well. Regarding your comment, we only have a few trees that turn color in the fall in Hawaii, but I have experienced fall in may places during my career. I miss the changing colors. Mahalo and Aloha, Connie
Shetley Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 8:51 PM
lovely, i'm a fan of personification... well done. love.
Freeman Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 6:23 PM
You among others have made my day with you comments on my poem"Love: The God Precept is Prior Cause" Yes the parasites are never far behind, they follow the only substance there is to feed on "Love" Us! Smile, Agape, Moses
Freeman Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Unique personification of the moon Carolyn. No wonder he hids his face, it is to escape from all the illusions he has be given credit for causing. Smile! Good luck in the contest. Agape, Moses
Locksley Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 4:59 PM
I love the idea of the Man in the Moon "moonlighting" in another galaxy! And you really carry a strong message home as to why he hides his face from Earth. Great poem! Take care, Diane
Johnson Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Great interpretation of the contest Carolyn, I enjoyed it. Good luck. Thanks for your comments on my list poem. Love, joyce
Culverhouse Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 4:35 PM
Enjoyed your take on the contest...I like the werewolf part, esp. Thanks for your comments on my silly poem. I laugh everytime I read it.
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 3:55 PM
Good luck in the contest with this great work that is sure to be in the winners' circle...Enjoyed reading your work...Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..The comments were so uplifting..Sara
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 3:20 PM
Good luck to you. This is a very nice write and no wonder your one of my favs. Have a great day dear!
Falotico Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 2:03 PM
This is REAL GOOD !!! a def. winner... I love the way you write....luv Michael
Loving Iii Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 1:43 PM
this might get you a winner.john
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 1:06 PM
Well expressed creative thoughts on The man in the moon, Carolyn, Good luck.
Roberts Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 12:59 PM
nice one, good luck in the contest
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