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The Locket

It has rained all night and here in this pause the morning takes breath beneath a clear sky. It will not last long as already thick clouds are creeping in from the south, their dark loads sagging with wet weight. I too take breath in this brief pause, look up to see a pale moon caught in daylight and framed within a tiny patch of blue. It seems like a faded photograph of a loved one lit by a moment before being resealed inside a locket. ( For Lin Lane fellow lover of the moon )

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Date: 6/17/2025 4:46:00 AM
Hi Paul….l am so sorry l missed your POTD my friend…l have been absent for a bit! It made happy to see your name up in lights with another amazing and very special Paul beauty! Congratulations Paul! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/18/2025 3:04:00 PM
Many thanks Deb for your kind words. So good to see your return, as always bringing a little sunshine to warm the down under winter cold. Take care my friend...
Date: 6/10/2025 9:38:00 AM
Hello Paul, Congrats on POTD. Such a quiet, rainy pause and just when I needed to breathe. That moment you describe, the moon caught in a sliver of blue, feels like something I’ve carried too. It’s beautiful, the way you frame fleeting joy and sorrow, that even brief light is worth holding close, like a locket around the heart. Blessings My Friend, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/11/2025 4:12:00 AM
Quite a profound summary of the poem Daniel, thankyou for giving it such attention, feel honored. Feedback is important. We live in the dream of our own poem and to get the perspective of an outside view provides a sense of what works and what is conveyed to the reader. Thankyou my friend.
Date: 6/9/2025 6:51:00 PM
' like a faded photograph inside a locket. ' Such a beautiful, yet memorial moment. Capturing the essence of the moon. You certainly have, my dear friend. The sky is magical, indeed. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/10/2025 2:53:00 AM
Hugs in return for such positive feedback dear Brandy....thankyou. Pleased to hear that the poem worked a little magic. Will have an extra few squares of dark chocolate to celebrate tonight. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 4:01:00 PM
A treasure indeed, Paul. A delightful picture conveyed thru verse perfected. A POTD no doubter. :o)
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:45:00 PM
So kind Arlo...thankyou for such positive comments...better than a protein shake for a old poet. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 2:27:00 PM
So glad you got POTD! Congrats!
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 4:42:00 PM
Many thanks for your return visit Kim....always a welcome guest...thankyou my friend. Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 12:28:00 PM
does it come with a little vampire statue. Great write Paul.
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:40:00 PM
Na...couldn't find one at the bargain shop...only had forlorn looking frogs frozen in cement. Gave it a miss.... many thanks for you comments my friend. Cheers, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 10:23:00 AM
Loverly. Just loverly paul
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 4:34:00 PM
Thankyou Tom for your kind words, much appreciated. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 9:40:00 AM
Gorgeous imagery and lovely subject. Congratulations on potd! Xo
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:34:00 PM
Pleased to receive your comments, Crystol, valued. Thankyou for reading the poem and your feedback that the imagery clicked. Cheers, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "The Locket" write. Have a blessed day writing away........
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:30:00 PM
Thanyou Paula...pleased that the poem shed a beam or two in your direction...much appreciate your kind words. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 7:55:00 AM
Children of the moon. Spiritual seekers. Congratulations on this sweet, romantic POTD Paul! :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 4:27:00 PM
Good take dear Linda...I can remember as a child wanting to hold the moon in my hands...things haven't changed. We are all seekers...trying to grasp that which seems to be kept from us by distance....soulful roadrunners. Fun trying though. Thankyou for your comments. Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations Paul on your wonderful write a truly deserved honour, you possess a wonderful gift in the words you offer and share with others, you are an exceptional poet. Congrats. Danny
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Date: 6/9/2025 4:19:00 PM
Honoured to receive such positive feedback Daniel, thankyou. Your kind words are valued, give an old poet a few more volts in the writing hand to attempt another launch towards celestial targets. Makes a difference. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 4:59:00 AM
Oh don’t mind Lin below, she’s way too humble to admit she’s a fantastic poet at all things moon related and beyond; A beautiful lunar metaphoric piece, of lockets and loved ones, congratulations on your well deserved POTD, cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 4:13:00 PM
I keep telling her the same...Lin almost has a copyright on moon poems. At least I get a view from the southern hemisphere, we have clearer air down here, less crowded. Many thanks David for kind words. Take care, Paul
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/9/2025 5:08:00 AM
;-) (((David)))... that's a hug
Date: 6/9/2025 4:25:00 AM
How nice to see you've received POTD, Paul. Thank you again for your thoughts, but I think you'll agree that it's the moon who should be receiving the honor.
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 4:04:00 PM
Indeed Lin....it always seems to outshine and exceed even our most lofty flights into the poetic stratosphere. It is enough though to be bathed in its gentle presence , to look up childlike in wonder. Thanks for words dear Lin, take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 4:12:00 AM
beautiful imagery, captivating and engaging words. congrats on POTD
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 3:59:00 PM
Such a lovely comment YR....thankyou so much for reading the poem. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 3:32:00 AM
Its a lovely tribute to Lin and her love of La Luna, many congrats on POTD! hugs Jan xx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 3:57:00 PM
Hard to escape the "spell" that old moon casts...gets us all sometime, showers us with a touch of magic. Many thanks for commenting dear Jan. Cheers, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 3:25:00 AM
Paul, a wonderful poem. I can escape to beautiful places in your poems. A nice dedication to Lin as well. Congratulations on POTD!
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 3:53:00 PM
It is an honour, dearTania, to have you as a guest in my little poetic theme parks...good to have your company. Thankyou for your kind words. Valued. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 2:00:00 AM
Congratulations Paul on your POTD with this beautiful poem. Congratulations also to Lin, I think your name written amongst moonbeams beats a name up in lights any day :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 3:50:00 PM
Many thanks DD....have been trying to trap moonbeams for ages with no success...if I manage a get a few in a bottle I will send you some as thanks for all your kindness and support. You have been there from the start. Take care, Paul
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Date: 6/9/2025 5:06:00 AM
It certainly sparks a thought or two ;)
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/9/2025 5:05:00 AM
Dilly, an electric moon. There must be a poem to write about that in someone's pen. ;-)
Date: 6/9/2025 1:38:00 AM
Dear Paul, a beautifully penned tribute to Lin. Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your lovely day! Best, Anne
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 3:45:00 PM
Thanks Anne for giving the poem your time and for your comments....valued. take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 1:28:00 AM
A beautiful tribute poem to Lin. Congratulations Paul on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 6:03:00 PM
Hi Beryl....thankyou for reading the poem and for your kind congratulatory note...much appreciated. Take care, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 12:41:00 AM
Lovely tribute to Lin, Paul. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 3:43:00 PM
Thankyou Tom, very much appreciate your congratulatory note. Cheers, Paul
Date: 6/9/2025 12:34:00 AM
A beautiful write! Thank you for sharing and congratulations on potd!
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/9/2025 3:41:00 PM
Hi Karen...so pleased to receive your kind words, thank you. Paul
Date: 6/7/2025 4:56:00 PM
Ooh this is very pretty. Love the sentiment. It is touching!
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/8/2025 2:31:00 PM
Thanks Kim. The moon is always a fitting subject for inclusion in a poem..both speak the same language. Paul
Date: 6/7/2025 4:36:00 PM
aww no wonder Lin is thrilled with this poem dedicated to her and her love of La Luna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/8/2025 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your kind words....La Luna sheds it's lovely light on us all. Cheers, Paul
Date: 6/7/2025 4:24:00 PM
Honored that you remembered how much I love the Lady Luna. If only we could capture one of her moonbeams in a locket ;-) Thank you very much, Paul.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2025 3:33:00 AM
Oh Lin we may not get potd/potw ourselves but yesterday's poem by Abdullah was a tribute to me and today you were honoured by Paul! hugs Jan xx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/8/2025 2:26:00 PM
Hard not to love the moon...it illuminates the creative corners of the soul. Take care dear Lin, Paul

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