The Last Organ Grinder

I can still remember visiting a small musical town,
a young boy holding his hat and singing his heart out for money.
His love for music was heart warming,
John was this little fellow's names.
He wore a big smile with big blue eyes,
as he walked and greeted each visitors.
A few years later I went back to that small musical town,
John had gown into a teen.
He was still singing his heart out,
but now he played a flute.
Over the years I traveled to many towns,
some how John was always on my mind.
One day a friend asked me about John,
then we decided to take a trip.
Could we even find John she asked?
The town had not changed,
but John had.
John was much older with gray in his hair,
playing an organ grinder and singing away.
He realized me right away,
we hugged like old times.
I see you have a different musical instrument,
John's face light up with pride.
His dad was the last organ grinder in town,
when he died~John had to carry on.
John and his dog Blue carry on for his dad,
the town and visitors still enjoy his musical talents.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 9:52 PM
Nice short story of life change... Congratulations on your win in the Contest..
Goldsmith Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 6:56 PM
Thanks for your lovely note and for your Congratulation. Glad you enjoyed my fun short story the "organ grinder." Have a great/fun day...................
Poet Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win, Paula.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Good to see you back. Thanks for your lovely note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story. I enjoyed bringing this story to life. "Happy Thursday With Blessings and A Smile" Have a great/fun day...................
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 6:32 AM
"2 Place"  The Last Organ Grinder~Date Written:10/20/2023
One Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Lovely memories and great storytelling.. is it true events? Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Thanks for your lovely note and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun write/story, "The Last Organ Grinder." It is not true. I wrote it for your wonderful contest. Thank You for having it and for my placement. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. "Happy Thursday With Blessings and A Smile" Have a great/fun day...................
Edmonds  Avatar
November 16, 2023 at 7:40 PM
I enjoyed the read Paula, those were wonderful days when the organ grinder played music in the town for those who happened to be around… Belle
Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thanks for your lovely note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "organ grinder" write/story. Wish they were still around to enjoy. They were so much fun to see/hear. "Happy Thursday With Blessings and A Smile" Have a great/fun day..................
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2023 at 10:45 AM
- A lovely story, Paula ... vividly written ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 11:49 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found this write to be a lovely story/vividly written. Hugs... "Happy Friday With A Smile" Have a great/fun day...................
James Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Your tales are always engaging from start to finish Paula and this is another fine example. Good luck in the contest. Emilia : )
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you found this write/tale to be engaging from start to finish. That makes my heart smile. "Happy Monday With A Smile" Have a great/fun day...................
DiMino Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:40 AM
It is our duty, to support the Cross, keeping it upright, its Crown pointing toward heaven and salvation. Maybe my read of your poem is a bit different, though my heart tells me, just as valid. God bless John and Blue...and you. Beautiful poem. Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 9:01 AM
Thanks for your lovely note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "organ grinder" write/story. It was just a write. "Happy Monday With Blessings and A Smile" Have a great/fun day...................
Buehler Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 11:01 PM
An engrossing tale, which charms and delights. Love this, Paula. Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love my fun "organ grinder" write/story and found it to have charms/delights. "Happy Monday With A Smile" Have a great/fun day...................
Bowring Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:49 AM
Such a lovely, engaging poem dear Paula. Loved the story and reading through the times from boy to older man. Great storytelling- the reader can so easily visualise the lovely scenes being played out. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Blessings to you :):)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed it and found my write to be great storytelling with lovely scenes being played out. "Happy Monday With A Smile" Have a great/fun day...................
Buhagiar Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 8:31 AM
A heartwarming recount of a young capable singer. Much appreciated.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:17 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found my write/story to be heartwarming. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 3:28 PM
A sweet tale, Paula. I am at a real loss on how to approach this particular contest!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun story/write. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
Romios Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Love this, I grew up in Chicago, and we always had one around with a monke.y, Thank you for a great reminder, Chicago was no small town, backthen. After we moved to the burbs,..Inever saw one again, beautiful things, replaced by being online?and now, the rebirth of fascism.. no surpise. I predicted this in my poetry……,lies spread by the news= thousands of dead Jews. Like the Nazis, hamas is high om drugs, Pangie
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you love my fun "organ grinder" write/story. I bet you had fun seeing the organ grinder/monkey in real life. Great memories are the best kind to have. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
McBride  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Love it, wonderful story telling gift you have : )
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:10 AM
Thanks for your note and kinds words. Glad you love my fun write/story. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
Lane Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 4:35 PM
You tell of very good tale, Paula. Best wishes for a place on the winning list.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun "organ grinder" write/tale. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
Rodrigues Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 4:06 PM
The part that made me smile: John was much older with gray in his hair, playing an organ grinder and singing away. He realized me right away, we hugged like old times…Very nice, Paula!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:06 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad my fun organ grinder write/story made you smile. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
Poet Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Paula, your story was incredibly moving. I was captivated by the seamless way it transported me through different eras. Your storytelling skills are truly commendable.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Thanks for your note and kinds words. You put a smile on my heart. Glad you found my write/story to be incredibly moving. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
Legros Kelley Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 1:59 PM
This is such a sweet story Paula! :) <3
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun story/write. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come................
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 1:17 PM
aww what a heart warming tale Paula:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 8:46 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you found my write to be a heart warming tale. Hugs... "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
M  Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Lovely tale Paula! Debx
Goldsmith Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 8:43 AM
Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my tale/write of the organ grinder. "Happy Sunday With A Smile" Have a great/fun~ day/week to come.................
Goldsmith Avatar
October 20, 2023 at 1:10 PM
The Last Organ Grinder~Date Written: 10/20/2023
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