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The Lake and Sky

Lake and sky Both are blue No clouds shown Clear blue sky

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James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 5/3/2020 10:10:00 AM

Very short yet awesomely sweet. visualizing super Write, Darlene Write on! Be blessed And take care of yourself James:)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/3/2020 12:10:00 PM

Hello James,hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. My friend. have a niceday. Be blessed you take care to.

Daisy Ward

Date: 4/20/2020 12:47:00 PM

THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT, YOUR POEMS ARE NICELY WRITTEN TO. THANKS AGAIN

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/20/2020 1:24:00 PM

Hello Daisy Ward, thank you forthe lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. be safe.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/18/2020 11:38:00 AM

Sheer delight when lake and sky are blue dearest, Darlene! Take care!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 12:40:00 PM

Hello Demetrio,yes I to think this way. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/18/2020 11:30:00 AM

Love blue! So pleased you did not say Azure, or some other colorful word. Few words often make the clearest, most appealing view. Great work!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 12:46:00 PM

Hello Joe DiMino,blue describes the sky and water. I like the color blue.Yes few words often make the poem clear, or appealing . Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2020 10:40:00 AM

A blank blue page to arrange the world in. Then God created the animals ...Love the imagery, Darlene. Stay well and don’t let the isolation get you down. Hugs Eve

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 12:57:00 PM

Hello Eve Roper,I like your theory on my poem.It makes me see my poem in a different way.I am trying not to let the isolation get to me. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/18/2020 8:47:00 AM

Lucky you, we are a bit cloudy today.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 9:30:00 AM

Hello Richard Lamoureux, no sunshine today. Just white cluds and very cold. It feels like winter. It has been snowing snowing, then melting,then snowing. Today is the same. Crazy weather.Have a nice day my friend. Be safe.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/17/2020 3:34:00 PM

Ah and so tranquil...love it.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 9:31:00 AM

Hello M.L. Kiser,yes it does sound tranquil, Thank you for the lovely comment. Keep safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/17/2020 12:24:00 PM

Brief and brilliant - this one is a fave also. Your write beautifully Darlene. Blessings, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2020 1:41:00 PM

Hello Jennifer,Thank you Jennifer.Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/16/2020 11:40:00 PM

Twelve words no syllables, and a wonderful striking poem..just love this

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2020 10:25:00 AM

Hello Harry Horsman, thank you Harry. I like the blue lake and blue sky. It feels like winter here today. I made myself a hot brunch. Now I feel warmer. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/16/2020 2:01:00 AM

Must be a peaceful scene thing to observe. One can imagine the beauty. Thanks for your latest visit. My poem was a bit of exaggerated fun...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2020 8:21:00 AM

Hello Eileen Manassian, we need a bit of exaggerated fun now in poetry. I wish to see this scene one day. The water is peaceful for me very relaxing. I enjoyed your poem Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend.

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/15/2020 12:20:00 PM

Simply beautiful ... Lovely brevity ...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/15/2020 2:46:00 PM

Hello Probir Gupta, thank you for the lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. Be safe. enjoy your day my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 4/14/2020 1:47:00 PM

Right now there are snow clouds and the lake is gray. Could use some of that blue sky. Good job here. Lovely imagery. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/14/2020 2:09:00 PM

Hello Judy,I could use some blue sky myself. White sky here today it is cold. Feels like it will snow. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs Darlene

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/14/2020 1:25:00 PM

We can use more of that blue in our lives...we want to step out into it!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/14/2020 2:06:00 PM

Hello Kim Yes I agree. Today the sky is all white. It is cold feels like it will snow. Werid weather. Have a nice day my friend. Be safe. Hugs Darlene

David Mchattie

Date: 4/13/2020 9:01:00 PM

Our lives are a bit cloudy at the moment and we all wait for the blue skies to return. Stay well my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/14/2020 7:16:00 AM

Hello David Hattie,Hi! Yes our lives are cloudy right now. I agree we a re all waiting for the blue sky to show up. Thank you. I wish you to stay well also. Have a nice day my friend.

Alex Nelson

Date: 4/13/2020 4:02:00 PM

Great simplicity. I love the content.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 5:54:00 PM

Hello Alex Nelson, so nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.

John Fleming

Date: 4/13/2020 4:54:00 AM

I like the economy of effort employed here, Darlene...your poem makes one feel as if they could just fall into it. Enjoyed! My very best regards. :) john

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 7:54:00 AM

Hello John Fleming,Hi! Thank you for the lovely comment. I wish I were near the water, I can only dream. Best regards Darlene Be safe my friend.

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/13/2020 4:05:00 AM

What a lovely painting you created! Short but vivid and beautiful.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 7:55:00 AM

Hello JCB Burl, thank you for the lovely comment. I wish I were by the water now. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/12/2020 11:33:00 PM

Hi Darlene~ another winning touch which shows your love of nature. Panagiota xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 8:02:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, yes i do like nature. I like the sound of the waves hitting the shores. To me it is relaxing. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx

Ojo Opeyemi Victor

Date: 4/12/2020 6:55:00 PM

Hello Mr Darlene De Beaulieu, i saw your comment, i really appreciate your word of encouragement. Thanks you've wrote a short nice poem too

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 7:48:00 AM

Hello Ojo I am a lady not a male. Your welcome Keep creating poems. Thank you for the comment on my poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Stay sFE.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2020 5:59:00 PM

pretty picture, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 7:46:00 AM

Hell Andrea, Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you had a lovely Easter. Enjoy your day my friend. Stay safe.Hugs Darlene xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/12/2020 3:37:00 PM

A perfect image Darlene, hope youre well. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 7:42:00 AM

Hello Tom,Thank you for the lovely comment. Yes so far so good thank you. Keep wll. Be safe. Enjoy your day my frind.

Silent One

Date: 4/12/2020 3:17:00 PM

Lovely imagery...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2020 7:41:00 AM

Hello Silent One, Thank you for the lovely comment. I hope you had a good Easter. Be safe. Enjoy your day my firend.

Allright Poet

Date: 4/12/2020 2:39:00 PM

It started very well, and I have enjoyed it. However, it is not advisable to use the same word in one stanza. example:- Lake and sky Both are blue No clouds are shown More birds flying through. Those who praises your poem are not sincere. You should never write the same word in one stanza. EG: Sky, Sky. I like your work but you're being misdirected with many praise comments. Soup mail me and I am here to advise you. Hoping this invitation is taking in good faith.

John Fleming
Date: 4/13/2020 4:58:00 AM

Wrong!!! Using the same word several times in one stanza is not just acceptable prose...but sometimes can be used to great effect. Might I suggest you try reading some of Ezra Pound's Cantos?

Allright Poet
Date: 4/12/2020 2:41:00 PM

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2020 1:54:00 PM

- Sounds like a wonderful day ... we have snow in the air ... cold !!! - Great poem, Darlene :) - Take care :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/12/2020 1:57:00 PM

ello Sunshine Smile Oh-snow! It is cool her with the sunshine and green grass. Thank you for the lovely comment. happy Easter Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx

Jan Allison

Date: 4/12/2020 1:09:00 PM

so few words paint a lovely picture Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/12/2020 1:59:00 PM

Hello Jan,when the sky and water are the same shade blue, it is beautiful. happy Easter. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene xx