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I pass it every day, a small brick house, that's shaded by a maple tree in spring; and underneath, the worn-out bench still sits- awaiting to be used, as in the past. The sale sign pains my heart as I pass by. Oh, how she loved to tend her flowers there, in her small garden near the lattice fence- then sit upon the bench to rest awhile. Three houses down the lane away from her- when we moved in, she welcomed us to join the neighborhood- so many years ago; the eldest on our street- we cherished her. The small brick house is vacant- four months, now. How sad- her flowers will need tending to, for spring has just begun, and she had passed at Christmas time- so unexpected then. Oh lady down the lane, we'll miss your smile and those dear waves you shared as we rode by; your time spent tending the backyard to keep us- and your flowers- smiling back at you. March 23, 2020 ~1st Place~ Contest: Strand Pick 4 Sponsor: Brian Strand Judged: 04/09/2020 ~7th Place~ Contest: Lady Down The Lane Sponsor: Craig Cornish Judged: 03/29/2020 Written in presence tense- reflecting on her passing many years ago at Christmas time.

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Date: 3/30/2020 11:16:00 AM
Lovely sensitive and descriptive memorial verses for a dear friend. Beautifully penned, Sandra.
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Date: 3/29/2020 11:58:00 PM
So sweet in remembrance of a cherished soul Sandra. It reminds me of my mother who loved to garden so she would spend some of her food money on flowers and plants. Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Date: 3/29/2020 6:24:00 PM
Back to wish you congratulations on placing in the contest, Sandra!
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Date: 3/24/2020 7:51:00 PM
A BEAUTIFUL TRIBUTE TO THE ONES THAT ARE FORGOTTEN AT TIMES.
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Date: 3/23/2020 2:05:00 PM
I like your blank verse, Sandra - something I should try more. Lovely tribute to the smiling lady down the lane!
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Date: 3/23/2020 1:53:00 PM
She became the flowers, the smiles and the cheers...a nice write Sandra
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Date: 3/23/2020 12:19:00 PM
Wonderful poem. You have nailed the spirit of the contest. We all can look back and appreciate the good neighbors we have lost. Have a great day my friend and stay well.
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Date: 3/23/2020 11:53:00 AM
This is so yearning and sad - I like the details of the small brick house and the lattice fence - I think it will do well in the contest!
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