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The Labrador

If I wasn't there, the rain swollen clouds would have still dumped their dark weight over the bay and through a gaping tear, let down a curtain of sunlight to start the day. And if I wasn't there, the old, arthritic labrador would have still waddled along the street with its bent but steady gait, undistracted, self absorbed and fixed in its own stare that allowed no deviation from years of devoted plod. The morning had no need for me, what happened would have happened anyway. There's an annoying sadness in knowing the earth doesn't seem to care if things pass unnoticed. Sunsets and waterfalls carry no favor. To it, the achingly beautiful and the catastrophic can happily go unreported. And yet I still ask - what's the point - and entertain the notion that the universe has this innate and unfathomable need for a witness to take in Creations unfolding riddle and make it fit together. I could be wrong, but for each of us, the privilege of being here on this gifted earth, to understand, care for and tell its story in song fulfills a purpose, if only to this end - or something more.

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Date: 11/6/2023 10:23:00 AM
Such a sweet poem with a profound message Paul!!
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Date: 10/28/2023 3:40:00 PM
It seems that rain makes many feel gloomy, while clouds filled with darkness enhance the fallen mood. Beauty can be found even in the simplest of moments. Never pass the chance to embrace blessings that are freely given. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Paul, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 9:29:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Brandy...an honor to know that the poem connected. Thankyou...take care, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 2:01:00 PM
Paul, excellent writing and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:27:00 PM
Thanks Constance...gives the confidence a lift with such recognition....regards, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write. Enjoy your day/win writing away............
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 9:24:00 PM
Thankyou Paula....appreciate your congratulatory note. Regards, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 11:49:00 AM
I love this Paul. There are some truly great lines here wrapped up in an exceptional poem. It all makes for great reading. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:22:00 PM
Very much appreciate your positive feedback Gary. Pleased that the read was worthwhile.....regards Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thought-provoking poetry, Paul. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 9:19:00 PM
Many thanks Bill...pleased to receive these words from you,, always valued. Regards,Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 8:12:00 AM
Oh my Paul….what a truly breathtaking write which l kept re-reading….Congratulations on POTD….Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 9:10:00 PM
Thanks Deb for spending some time with the poem...always good to hear from you. Take care, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 7:52:00 AM
So sweetly and thoughtfully exquisite. Congratulations with your POTD! :)
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:08:00 PM
Thanks Linda...appreciate your comments... Regards, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 7:26:00 AM
Paul, your poetry is superb, I like to escape and enjoy the poetic journey of your poems, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:04:00 PM
Feel free to escape Tania...honored to be able to provide a pathway. Thankyou for your support...valued. regards, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 6:31:00 AM
This is beautiful. I believe that beauty needs an audience, was just yesterday thinking my husky and I must get in more sunsets. I love your poem. Congratulations on POTD! Have a wonderful day. xomo
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:00:00 PM
Thanks Maureen...pleased that you liked the poem. Hope you managed a sunset or two with your husky...the time of day when the earth speaks. Regards, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on a unique potd!
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Date: 10/28/2023 8:54:00 PM
Thakyou Karen for your congratulatory note...appreciated. Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 5:24:00 AM
"the morning had no need for me" that pretty well sums it up Paul. I often think the planet would be better off without us. a beautiful write and a meaningful POTD
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 8:34:00 PM
Thanks John for your comments. I was pleased I got this poem to the surface....been struggling a bit with some challenges. Value your support as always.
Date: 10/28/2023 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations Paul: You have voiced what many feel but can’t quite bring to the surface. My little dog passed recently and yet every moment of my day is still filled with what he would be doing at that moment in the day. So life goes on but our presence matters to some. Very thought provoking poem. A FAV,
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 8:27:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne for your comments...always valued. So sorry for the loss of your little friend....they teach us much about unconditional devotion. Take care, Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 4:22:00 AM
Sadly, most folks are more concerned with money rather than beauty. Deep and brilliant thoughts Paul. Congratulations on POTD. Hoping all is well with you.
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 8:22:00 PM
Good to hear from you Daniel...you often come to mind old friend. Many thanks for your comments.
Date: 10/28/2023 4:15:00 AM
stunning imagery with a profound message. Your words resonate with me, perhaps because I'm older. These lines are still in my mind: There's an annoying sadness in knowing the earth doesn't seem to care if things pass unnoticed.Your poem was thought provoking on many levels. Congrats on POTD..faving this one and am now following you. have a great day, Sara
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Date: 10/28/2023 8:19:00 PM
Thankyou so much Sara for your thoughtful and encouraging words. Honored that you think my work worthy of following, very much appreciated. It was a pleasant surprise for me that the poem resonated with so many readers. Regards Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 3:55:00 AM
Your way with painting imagery is so profound especially those opening lines are unique and so creative. Not sure if ive read your work before but i am so glad i did today as this is truly a brilliant poem! One that i enjoyed reading. And leaves also a deep and thought provoking message too especially the ending is soulful! Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved
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Date: 10/28/2023 8:13:00 PM
I blush with such positive comments....thankyou for your thoughtful and encouriging words. Pleased that the poem was worth the read and that it had meaning for you. Regards Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 3:30:00 AM
Dear Paul, This is such a deep and fantastic write. The POTD honor is so deserved sir. I truly enjoyed your pondering and deep spiritual perspective.
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 8:06:00 PM
So glad that the poem was a worthy read...your comments Nancy are very much appreciated. Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 3:04:00 AM
This is a gorgeous poem; the sentiment of longing, questioning of purpose.. and yet.. such a deep expression of truth in beauty. Maybe, just maybe, this is all for us. We are the purpose. I am so encouraged by your words, Paul. POTD is so well deserved and a full endorsement :))
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Date: 10/28/2023 8:02:00 PM
Honored to reecieve such comments...thankyou Sam. Good to learn that the poem had meaning for you. It seems most of us share similiar feelings and ask the same questions. Value your feedback. Regards Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 2:05:00 AM
Without Monster Mash playing in the background this poem is even more beautiful. It's the tranquil moment that feels undeserved but present in my day, just like a stroll amongst beauty. My presence seemingly making no difference but that feeling that the universe knows a little bit more than I do about it all. Stunning Paul - to say deserving of POTD is an understatement.
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 7:56:00 PM
Don't think I could compete with the MONSTER MASH. Thanks DD for kind words and sharing your response. Always good to know if a poem really speaks to the reader.
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Date: 10/28/2023 3:06:00 AM
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Date: 10/28/2023 1:48:00 AM
Such a beautifully written thoughtful and so reflective poem Paul. Incredibly well crafted. Many congratulations on a richly deserved POTD. The last stanza, in particular, is truly amazing. So much to ponder … Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you for a wonderful weekend :):)
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 7:51:00 PM
Thankyou Christina for such positive comments. Value your feedback and so pleased that the poem offered an opportunity for reflection and enjoyment. Means a lot. Paul
Date: 10/28/2023 12:53:00 AM
I believe we as intelligent observers are indeed the sentient eyes of the universe, it had to become self aware at some point, and what better being to choose than curious humans to explore every conceivable consequence within itself, congratulations Paul on an absolutely brilliant POTD, cheers David
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:44:00 PM
Inclined to agree with yr views David....seems to be the most appropriate fit....in any case it is the one that instinctively comes to mind. Many thanks for your thoughtful comments.
Date: 10/27/2023 10:23:00 AM
This is a beautiful thought, Paul, and one I hold tightly to dear. Beauty connects with beauty, I believe. Very special. Cx
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:38:00 PM
Very much appreciate your comments Cynthia...so pleased that it had meaning and connected. Paul
Date: 10/27/2023 8:23:00 AM
Even against the backdrop of being at a children's Halloween party Paul I am still moved by the beauty of these words, they resonate strongly with me and I've tried myself to capture this same feeling in words. There is always the feeling of so much more when being the sole witness to beauty or even feeling like the only one with open eyes as life plays out effortlessly around us. Adore this, it's a favourite x
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/28/2023 7:35:00 PM
Thanks DD for entering so fully into the poem...you are always a treasured guest. Complex subject matter but I think many of us experience such. Take care.

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