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The Kite POTD

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I must fly a kite and lift it ever so high And load all my cares on it. The wind suddenly Veers direction and down comes My kite bringing back my cares.

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Mike Bayles

Date: 11/26/2024 10:05:00 PM

Nice poem. If only we could have our cares fly away.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/25/2024 9:34:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Victor. So glad you received this Honor. God bless you my friend...

Valsa George

Date: 11/25/2024 9:34:00 PM

Dear Victor.... bury your cares in the soil and place a stone too over it, so that they will never come up again. Enjoyed this metaphoric write. As long as we are alive, there will be cares and botherations, also joys and excitements. See them as part of life. This is all we can do. Congratulations on your POTD, dear friend.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/25/2024 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/25/2024 7:44:00 PM

Dear Victor, with the wind being unpredictable at tines, this happens more than it should. Place your load of cares on paper and bury it, that way; they're out of sight and out of mind. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/25/2024 7:11:00 PM

I'm back with congratulations on POTD, Victor. Your poem is wonderfully deserving.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/25/2024 5:42:00 PM

Dear Victor, the kite so full of the promise of relief until your high-flyer and your hope were spurned by the wind.. wistful emotions so beautifully expressed. Congratulations for your exceptional poem being honored with POTD! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/25/2024 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations Victor, on POTD! The kite has brought cares back, because you have not a care in the world today! Enjoy it! Xhugs ~ Anaya

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/25/2024 2:47:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, Victor. This is the reality for everyone, the kite comes back even if we don't want to.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/25/2024 2:40:00 PM

Oh no. No one wants bad things back. I enjoy this heartfelt poem of reality. Congratulations on POTD.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/25/2024 1:19:00 PM

Congrats on POTD! :)

Silent One

Date: 11/25/2024 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD dear Victor..

Jim Slaughter

Date: 11/25/2024 9:14:00 AM

That's the problem with kites...and cares. Congrats on POTD, Victor.

Deb M

Date: 11/25/2024 8:38:00 AM

Always lovely to see your name in bright lights Victor…..Congratulations.on POTD! Cuddles….Debx

John Read

Date: 11/25/2024 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations Victor on your POTD, keep that kite flying high.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/25/2024 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading "The Kite" write. Send up another kite & make it take all your cares far away. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/25/2024 6:05:00 AM

Oh my! Sounds like a Charlie Brown moment. He often was tangled up in all his troubles in the form of a kite. Hugs and congrats on POTD. Hope your day is brighter today, my frien!

Tom Woody

Date: 11/25/2024 5:35:00 AM

Nice poetic short with a message attached. The endless cycle of life's ups and downs. Enjoy your day in the spotlight

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/25/2024 5:05:00 AM

Dear Victor, What a wonderful metaphor on life—a perfect Sedoka for POTD. Congratulations and I must go fly a kite with my granddaughters. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Maria Williams

Date: 11/25/2024 4:54:00 AM

I used to love watching people fly their kites on the beach. Guess we've all had that wish at some time or other, wishing our worries would ride away on the wind. Well,you got POTD dear Victor ,so that kite did brighten your day. Congratulations and hugs

Joseph May

Date: 11/25/2024 4:54:00 AM

Congrats on POTD

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/25/2024 4:21:00 AM

Indeed, the truth of life. Ascent and descent. Very beautifully written. Congratulations!

Karen Jones

Date: 11/25/2024 4:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your potd honor Victor!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/25/2024 3:56:00 AM

Dear victor, this is so beautiful and deep and creates imagery in such a way that gets readers too would wish their cares and worries would fly away and be carried away like the kite in the wind that youv used here in your poem. If only we can just do what youv said especially in your opening, congratulations on potd, well deserved

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/25/2024 3:40:00 AM

Victor, a great poem, congratulations on POTD.