The Hunter

She sits unmoving Birds flutter, just out of reach Undaunted, she waits

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James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2009 4:07:00 PM

Stealth on four legs, kool Haiku Barbara>>James

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/20/2008 11:05:00 AM

Great Haiku. You've captured it perfectly in this write. Don't like to see them get caught but a cats prowess is beautiful in it's own right. Love Robin

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/20/2008 3:43:00 AM

Sounds like my cat! lol she get's the poor things every time, that crafty girl. :) Love, Kristin

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/20/2008 12:10:00 AM

E-Mail redsoxkingfan@yahoo.com Beeg, Zeaphuy ( Good Evening ) YOUR right It is late and I am giving an Exam tomorrow I mean Later on this morning on Bordelaise Sauce I alway use shallots amd a pinch of hot Cayenne. Anyway My Birth name is Harry Daniel Johnson the birth of HGarvey Daniel Esquire is to long a story to post on comments I will Write YOU later Tonight Yetems for all YOUR Special comments LOVE YOU my Xlaimp Always...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/19/2008 8:12:00 PM

Beeg, I met to ask YOU if this POEM The Hunter is about YOUR cat, LOVE YOU...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/19/2008 8:08:00 PM

Dear Beeg, spelled Xlaimp - Xliamp if we are to create new words we have to spell them correct If i am being a pain I'm sorry I'm living a boyhood I never had Yeterns, MY Dear Xlaimp...HG

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/19/2008 7:49:00 PM

I think I like BEEG That is what I will call YOU When I was in N.Y. Many years ago I saw excerpts of private Letters of Anne Bronte to her sisters some of the letter did not make sense at first until I read about their imaginary Land and language I have been Working on a POEM for several months I call "Zimzfora" the translation- Aquarose the idea being an alien trying to understand Human Emotions as YOU can seeZ=a I=q ect. this maybe silly but I enjoy it also on your silly comment YOU Cont.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/19/2008 6:00:00 PM

Wow..this is a perfect haiku.....can picture the patience of that cat.....crafty little devil! Great job! ~ Carrie

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/19/2008 5:44:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Beautiful Haiku about YOUR cat that "tolerates YOU' I presume Very Clever I am going to start signing off with Xlaimp to everyone I comment to When they ask What it means may I tell them It is a word from the Gorelick-Esquire Dictionary ? Yes YOU may call me HG, May I call YOU BARB It is YOUR turn for a new word X Y or Z YOUR choice soon we may start with the rest of the Alphabet Xlaimp...HG

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 12/19/2008 4:45:00 PM

wow great haiku....Maryam