The Horrors of War

(NB  The character in this poem does not belong to any country but is generic.)

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The sirens howl.
I can smell the fear
I sow in the city.
My super gun can tear 
Through buildings
Where innocent people 
Lie huddled in despair.
I do not gloat.
My heart is ice.  
I have a job to do.
 
I feel all powerful
like a god.
I lie flat on the roof
High on a building.
The sun is high,
Scorching unrelenting,
blinding like a furnace
grilling sweat out of me.
 
Yet I lie still 
And watch the streets 
For the hated enemy.
He'll come.
He never learns.
He too thinks
he's like a god.
One of us may be dead tonight.
Or both!
Who knows who?
 
Far away I see the hill tops,
where eagles dare to fly.
Below the happy pastures,
the luscious grasses tall and fine.
Sheep graze, and women watch.
I feel the desires of old.
 
I wake to the present.
I know my job.
Who can beat me?
They will not see me,
Nor flee from me, 
They'll die at my hand.
For I fight legitimacy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Legros Kelley Avatar
January 3, 2024 at 4:46 PM
Icy cold terror, such a chilling write Victor. My goodness, you captured what must be the heartlessness of one so ruthless. The scariest thing you have ever written in my memory, because your usual poems are of love and beauty. This one is terrifying, truly! You are a very gifted writer.
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 1:52 PM
Cool poem, Victor. i like the contast made with the grazing animals and woman watcching the pasture.
Ball Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 6:57 PM
WoW Victor. You capture the true sniper here. I could see him lying in wait for someone he doesn't even know. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 10:51 AM
Powerful poetry, my friend!
Kitchin Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Victor, a powerful poem, well penned, hugs.
Buehler Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 5:13 PM
A gripping and realistic portrayal of hellish war and its sad, bitter consequences. Superbly written. Blessings.
Hind Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 4:33 PM
This is very poignant...I guess you are personifying in this poem? Either way, you dare to be honest. I wish peace for you.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 5, 2023 at 5:17 AM
No personification of me. I am totally against war.
Rolland Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 3:36 PM
a heart wrenching poem, for me too, Victor, surprising and so realistic, a great master piece have a sweet and quiet sunday
DiMino Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 9:14 AM
When one carries a gun, to use the tool effectively, you become that cold, unfeeling weapon. The gun has no caring mind, has no feeling soul. Only knowing what it is. It becomes you. Victors in war...but no winners. One can rebuild, paint over, but fragments and stains resurface. Bleed into waking and sleeping memory. Follow us into eternity. Great write, my friend.
Roper Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Wonderful story, Victor, enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.
Allison Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 7:28 AM
a heart wrenching poem Victor hugs jan x
Poet Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 6:52 AM
An unjustifiable power...murder has turned out to be a way of life, and that's tragic, Victor. The emotions you express in this lovely poem are bang on. And very painful. I don't know how the kids, adults, and military in such places sleep or survive.
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Wars are always destructive. Aptly evocative emotions you convey, Victor.
Andresen Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 5:56 AM
- A power no human should have had...killing has become a part of his life...terribly sad, Victor - Great written - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 4:52 AM
Sigh so sad! And heart wrenching! I cant even imagine how those children and individuals or soldiers in such places sleep or survive! Heart hurts! You’ve described very well and painted imagery so eloquently! Pleasure reading
Ruwindi Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Omg such a powerful poem. Well done!
Jones Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 12:59 AM
Engaging. I like that the character is generic.
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