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The Haunted House

We took the plunge and bought a country home, A place for peace and a chance to be alone, I cant believe the price we paid for this place, Needs some repair but its no disgrace. Left the city that was sunny and bright, Pulled up to the house and it now seems like night, Looking proudly at our new home, Suddenly we don't feel so all alone. I reached for the front door when, It opened by itself, must have been the wind, We walked in and had to shake off a chill, Trying to concentrate on our house and the new thrill. This place is old and there is no phone, But we always felt like we were never alone, A few times I thought I could see, A shadow in the corner watching me. Eventually one night the terror started, Knocks, slaps and scratches from the departed, Who despised all the humans they could see, Giving me evil thoughts about my family. Suddenly I'm chasing them through the house, Trying to axe my children and my spouse, I don't care if we ever leave, No need to cry, no need to grieve. They'll find the children in the library wall, And that wretched wife is in the attic above the hall, I'm in the pantry under the shelf, Where I finally hung myself. I'm looking out the window waiting to see, The arrival of the next family, To welcome them to their country home, Where they will stay forever and never be alone. Paranormal Poetry Contest Sponsored by : Robert James Liguori 12/13/21

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Date: 9/16/2018 8:15:00 PM
I'm a little late, Timothy, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/16/2018 9:12:00 PM
It's never too late for kind words. Thank you Eve
Date: 9/5/2018 11:48:00 AM
Timothy, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned and creepy tale, well done !
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/5/2018 12:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Dear Heart!
Date: 9/1/2018 8:14:00 PM
This wonderful chilling poem had shades of the shining in it. Superb writing Tim! Congratulations on your win!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/2/2018 1:46:00 AM
Thank you Comnie!
Date: 8/17/2018 12:39:00 AM
Scary, spooky... a great haunted house story. The rhyme and rhythm are excellent. :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/17/2018 4:19:00 PM
Thank you Susan!
Date: 8/16/2018 5:45:00 PM
Wow - you went all out, Timothy. Superbly penned. A convincing haunt. Bravo.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/16/2018 9:20:00 PM
Thank you much Miss Line. The contest said try to scare or laugh. I went the scare route.
Date: 8/15/2018 3:40:00 AM
You certainly take the reader to the place, you write so well of, wonderful story, wonderful poetry.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/15/2018 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Harry much appreciated.
Date: 8/14/2018 4:26:00 AM
Gruesome but well written. Enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest, Timothy. // Barry
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/14/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Barry
Date: 8/14/2018 4:15:00 AM
Excellent spooky story, good luck in the contest!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/14/2018 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Tania

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