The Haunted House

We took the plunge and bought a country home,
A place for peace and a chance to be alone,
I cant believe the price we paid for this place,
Needs some repair but its no disgrace.

Left the city that was sunny and bright,
Pulled up to the house and it now seems like night,
Looking proudly at our new home,
Suddenly we don't feel so all alone.

I reached for the front door when,
It opened by itself, must have been the wind,
We walked in and had to shake off a chill,
Trying to concentrate on our house and the new thrill.

This place is old and there is no phone,
But we always felt like we were never alone,
A few times I thought I could see,
A shadow in the corner watching me.

Eventually one night the terror started,
Knocks, slaps and scratches from the departed,
Who despised all the humans they could see,
Giving me evil thoughts about my family.

Suddenly I'm chasing them through the house,
Trying to axe my children and my spouse,
I don't care if we ever leave,
No need to cry, no need to grieve.

They'll find the children in the library wall,
And that wretched wife is in the attic above the hall,
I'm in the pantry under the shelf,
Where I finally hung myself.

I'm looking out the window waiting to see,
The arrival of the next family,
To welcome them to their country home,
Where they will stay forever and never be alone.

Paranormal Poetry Contest
Sponsored by : Robert James Liguori
12/13/21
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:15 PM
I'm a little late, Timothy, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
Mcguire Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 9:12 PM
It's never too late for kind words. Thank you Eve
La France Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Timothy, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned and creepy tale, well done !
Mcguire Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Thank you very much Dear Heart!
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 8:14 PM
This wonderful chilling poem had shades of the shining in it. Superb writing Tim! Congratulations on your win!
Mcguire Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 1:46 AM
Thank you Comnie!
Gentry Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 12:39 AM
Scary, spooky... a great haunted house story. The rhyme and rhythm are excellent. :)
Mcguire Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 4:19 PM
Thank you Susan!
Gauthier Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 5:45 PM
Wow - you went all out, Timothy. Superbly penned. A convincing haunt. Bravo.
Mcguire Avatar
August 16, 2018 at 9:20 PM
Thank you much Miss Line. The contest said try to scare or laugh. I went the scare route.
Horsman Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 3:40 AM
You certainly take the reader to the place, you write so well of, wonderful story, wonderful poetry.
Mcguire Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 3:50 AM
Thank you Harry much appreciated.
Stebbings Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:26 AM
Gruesome but well written. Enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest, Timothy. // Barry
Mcguire Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Barry
Kitchin Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 4:15 AM
Excellent spooky story, good luck in the contest!
Mcguire Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Tania
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