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The Flame of Life - With Darren White

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Take me down to the stillness only love can bring give me light in this darkness so I can see lift my chin, touch the baby hair on my skin illuminate my being let me live again light the wick that doused in silt rebuild us for this night curl my mouth to crescent smile under moon's fragile fold treasured moments, the rarest of gems in kaleidoscopic dreams, together we blend stillness once known now stirs under our touch life’s veil flickers as we catch a glimpse then flees unbridled a bird released

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Date: 6/27/2018 8:42:00 AM
Two skillful pens, one masterful result. A thoroughly enjoyable read.
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Date: 3/23/2018 4:52:00 AM
Good Morning Gentlemen (white wolf and darren) I will forever be a free verse girl and you both do this entry and free verse proud. I was drawn to the tone and voice not to mention the emotive factor. This is an entry to be read out loud. Marvelous work. May this day find you both well. PS - Hello Penguin
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Date: 3/17/2018 3:39:00 PM
I always love writing with you :)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/23/2018 4:54:00 AM
Good Morning Darren. How in the world are you. Your entry with White Wolf is marvelous. You both should be proud. Have a great day Penguin.
Date: 3/7/2018 4:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful flow. Awesomeness.
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Date: 3/6/2018 7:54:00 PM
The rhythm is wonderful, lulling, and your last stanza the cherry on top, love it, wonderful poem you two! xomo x2 <3
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