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The Flame of Life - With Darren White

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Take me down to the stillness
     only love can bring
give me light in this darkness 
     so I can see
lift my chin, touch the baby hair 
     on my skin
illuminate my being 
     let me live again

light the wick that doused in silt 
     rebuild us for this night
curl my mouth to crescent smile
     under moon's fragile fold

treasured moments, the rarest of gems
     in kaleidoscopic dreams,
together we blend
     stillness once known
now stirs under our touch

life’s veil flickers 
    as we catch a glimpse
then flees unbridled
   a bird released

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/27/2018 8:42:00 AM
Two skillful pens, one masterful result. A thoroughly enjoyable read.
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Date: 3/23/2018 4:52:00 AM
Good Morning Gentlemen (white wolf and darren) I will forever be a free verse girl and you both do this entry and free verse proud. I was drawn to the tone and voice not to mention the emotive factor. This is an entry to be read out loud. Marvelous work. May this day find you both well. PS - Hello Penguin
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Date: 3/17/2018 3:39:00 PM
I always love writing with you :)
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/23/2018 4:54:00 AM
Good Morning Darren. How in the world are you. Your entry with White Wolf is marvelous. You both should be proud. Have a great day Penguin.
Date: 3/7/2018 4:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful flow. Awesomeness.
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Date: 3/6/2018 7:54:00 PM
The rhythm is wonderful, lulling, and your last stanza the cherry on top, love it, wonderful poem you two! xomo x2 <3
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