the fall of Saint Tropez

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Saint Tropez is a summer town.
Smaller than it ought to be, really.
Like when you realize the French quarter,
in New Orleans, is just three blocks wide and long.

In the fall, there’s a feeling of disuse in Saint Tropez.
A turquoise bike leans haggard against a tree,
and summer leaves gather in gutters like trash.
Your appearance in a bar is treated like a surprise.

The wait staff gathers, like they might take your picture
and not your order - one brings napkins another the menu.

Summer memories are indistinct now, from disuse.
You aren’t sedated by sunlight and warm ocean airs.

Was summer some French, romantic, cinematic fantasy,
like "La Belle et la Bête" or "And God Created Woman"?
Or was it deliciously bright, seductive and real.

You find yourself saying, “In the summer, when the thyme,
lavender, rosemary, citrus and jasmine bloom, the aromas
are strong, actually physical, like going into an Ulta store,
where a thousand delicate perfumes vie for attention.”

But it’s like describing ghosts or deserts under glass.
You search for the words, like a poet or an actress, unable
to remember her lines - lines that would make it real,
invoke it, precious and immediate - like a spell.

The Saint Tropez of summer.

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Date: 2/26/2024 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Anais! Well-written poetry. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/26/2024 10:42:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/25/2024 9:00:00 PM
I loved this POTD, for me, it was like being inn Saint tTropez. Making this a FAV! Warm Congratulations, with cheers and confetti for you. Pangie
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:43:00 AM
Thanks Pangie =]
Date: 2/25/2024 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations Anais on receiving poem of the day for your engaging write about Saint Tropez… Beryl
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:43:00 AM
Thanks, Beryl =]
Date: 2/25/2024 3:19:00 PM
It sounds like Summer in ' Saint Tropez ' is more appealing than Fall. At this moment I'm wishing I could be, in ' sunlight and warm ocean airs. ' Either way, the images you paint leave me in complete awe. Congratulations Anais, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thanks so much, Brandy =]
Date: 2/25/2024 9:22:00 AM
I, too, remember being a bit "unimpressed" with Saint Tropez when I was there...with the whole Riviera, actually. Especially the beaches. Of course, that was beaucoup years ago. Thanks for the reminder, Anais.
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:47:00 AM
Like Florida, a lot depends on where / when and with whom you go. Our favorite beaches are in Heraclee, France about 11 miles southwest (i think) of Saint Tropez town. Thanks for the comment!
Date: 2/25/2024 8:55:00 AM
Your short stories leave the reader with fascinant. Ah yes, the greatest love story and there's the demon driven temptress (Bridgett) loved your references. Congratulations on your POTD Anais Vionet! ~I Am Anaya
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:50:00 AM
The vignettes are my favorites - I know I'll never be a great poet and the stories - the challenge of creating a scene in a thousand words or less - seem more fun to write. And I'm not a particular fan of rhyme. Thanks for the kind comment =]
Date: 2/25/2024 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Victor =]
Date: 2/25/2024 7:10:00 AM
Dear poet Anais, Congratulations on this fascinating POTD. Have a blessed day and enjoy the recognition. It is most deserved.
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Date: 2/25/2024 6:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful write/story. Love It... Have a blessed day/week with your win..........
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Date: 2/25/2024 6:01:00 AM
This is lovely Anais. I feel as though I am there in summer and again in fall through your imagery. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Date: 2/25/2024 5:08:00 AM
Well, look who got POTD. Enjoy the day
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/26/2024 2:44:00 PM
It's not an error. You have real talent. My suggestion? Less diary entries and more real poetry and stories. You're good
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:53:00 AM
I KNOW.. *whispering* "it was probably a clerical error" *finger to lips*
Date: 2/25/2024 5:01:00 AM
Dear Anais, congrats on POTD. It captures the contrasting essence of the town through the seasons brilliantly. The poem wonderfully shows us the off-season Saint Tropez, highlighting the stark difference from its summer vibrancy. The imagery perfectly sets the tone of disuse. The way the wait staff reacts to your presence, treating it like a surprise, adds a layer of humor and emphasizes the deserted feel. I love how you question the reality of summer in the final lines. Is it a "French, romantic fantasy" or a "deliciously bright reality"? You leave the reader pondering these contrasting experiences. The poem is a beautiful example of using sensory details and evocative comparisons, like comparing summer's fragrance to "an Ulta store." Overall, it's a thought-provoking portrait of seasonal metamorphosis and the elusiveness of capturing specific memories. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:53:00 AM
What a wonderful review - thank you =]
Date: 2/25/2024 4:56:00 AM
Anais, I enjoyed your poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:54:00 AM
Thanks Tania =]
Date: 2/25/2024 3:05:00 AM
Thank youfor this enchanting write Anais. It is alive with a longing for a lost summer, a distant lover, a moment cool and distant. I shall FAVE this as I have never been to Saint Tropez and yet, now linger in a longing to visit her again.
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:55:00 AM
Thanks John =]
Date: 2/25/2024 1:42:00 AM
Dear Anais - so lovely to discover your poetry and short stories - my daughter would love this - big congratulations on your Poem of the Day honour. Well deserved and refreshing! Look forward to discovering more from you :) Sx
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Sam =]
Date: 2/25/2024 1:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your potd honor!
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Karen =]
Date: 2/24/2024 11:49:00 AM
Very cool write! When we had a bad Winter storm, I was stuck in, my hubby was in India. I woke him up in his middle of the night with his hot weather. He found what I was saying incomprehensible…lol! A fave for me! Delightful, Anais!
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Date: 2/26/2024 10:56:00 AM
Thanks Kim =]
Date: 2/23/2024 4:50:00 PM
Bummer dudette. Now about this smashing thingy...
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/23/2024 6:49:00 PM
I was on hello poetry for a while but didn't like it. Is that the one that mandates you comment on several poems before you post? Can't remember but there must have been something I didn't like about it
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Date: 2/23/2024 6:20:00 PM
I'm surprised you commented on that one here.. But as an amateur smasher, I'm sure there's nothing about smashing that you could learn from ME =] It drove me CrAzY that it wouldn't let me use the line about sweat (pheromones) and attraction and desire but then failed to censor the last line. The piece has a flow and a build-up that's completely lost - thanks, PS. My favorite site (hello poetry) doesn't sensor at all - but oh, well. Thanks for the comment, Tom! =]
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