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For most of us, we strive to do our best Exceeding expectations earnestly Our pinnacle is average at best Which serves to satisfy our vanity When lights come on, some move toward the light Attracted like a moth drawn to a flame We watch, amazed, the risk they take in flight Admiring and bestowing them with fame But when they burn and crash there is no net We judge them from the cheap seats as they fall The beauty of their greatness we forget A falling star is all we can recall For those of you who don't already know Man's greatness is a peak not a plateau. by Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/13/2017 7:21:00 PM
Rise high to briefly touch the sun, crash and burn are only options remaining. WHEN AT THE VERY TOP OF THE MOUNTAIN, ONLY WAY LEFT IS DOWN.. Tremendous sonnet, great message and so beautifully written.. A fav..
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Date: 6/7/2017 8:10:00 AM
Amen!
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Date: 6/6/2017 11:00:00 PM
The higher you fly, the harder you fall.
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Date: 6/6/2017 5:25:00 PM
I though it awful to witness the police video. Does he have no right to privacy at times like that? A great tribute to him and all fallible humans like him.
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Date: 6/5/2017 7:53:00 PM
So true, Danny. When one reaches the peak the only way to go is straight or down. And, it's such a shame about Tiger Woods. It's hard to understand but one never knows what causes another person's tragic fall. As observers, we must not judge though. Mercy is the way. Great poem!
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Date: 6/5/2017 7:45:00 AM
I can't judge people who fall publicly, even Trump. What would I do if I were up there?
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Date: 6/5/2017 3:58:00 AM
Beautifully written sonnet ... Loved it thoroughly... Great write... Thanks for sharing...
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Date: 6/4/2017 7:04:00 AM
- This is a poem of truth, Daniel - We judge without justice - Everyone is doing their best - A lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2017 3:47:00 AM
The higher the rise, the harder the fall, but most of the time we are the ones in the driving seat, so...! Having said that, you have written a lovely sonnet, and it deserves full marks! Regards // paul
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Date: 6/3/2017 8:28:00 PM
OMG, Tiger Woods? I did not even recognize him without the familiar hat he always wears. I did an image search and also found that his luck has been horrible lately. It's great you found inspiration for this poem with stories like his.
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Date: 6/3/2017 8:24:00 PM
Daniel, I am seeing this one again , only at Soup this time, and I see it must be inspired by this man in the picture. I feel stupid not knowing who he is, but I am reading comments and seeing he was a mighty one who stumbled! You did your sonnet perfectly.
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Date: 6/3/2017 6:56:00 AM
Yeah, agreed, DT:) beautiful sonnet:)
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Date: 6/3/2017 6:33:00 AM
Though I differ a little, nevertheless the sonnetry carrying a bold statement I do love and admire ...great ...
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Date: 6/3/2017 5:30:00 AM
Good Morning Daniel. Please allow me to let your words stand. There is nothing I could add or change. You expressed and stated yourself marvelously and in a poetic fashion as well with your Sonnet. You allow the reader to look within. Well done entirely and completely including the title. Have a wonderful morning and day.
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Date: 6/2/2017 4:07:00 PM
we all have failed, the difference is when we do nobody cares enough to take a picture of it...then you have those who slow down to look at a wreck...for what purpose? "great sonnet, my friend"
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Date: 6/2/2017 9:31:00 AM
Great write Daniel, it was the prescription pills that made him wobbly, but his glory days have long since gone..
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Date: 6/2/2017 9:30:00 AM
It's a peak indeed. It lasts a second in a lifetime, and then you have to live the rest of your life.... Very well written sonnet, with a wise lesson.
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Date: 6/2/2017 7:52:00 AM
You have captured the essence of one who has enjoyed his celebrity only to stumble and have the news glorify his fall as much as they did his rise. Brilliant! : )
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:36:00 PM
Living too long in the fast lane does crazy things to people.... Excellent DT
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Date: 6/1/2017 7:33:00 PM
Oh but so true. Too much judging not enough love in this trouble world... Great work, Danny :) xoxo
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Date: 6/1/2017 4:46:00 PM
ah yes, the mighty do fall! great poem, daniel, with a wise and catchy ending...
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Date: 6/1/2017 2:48:00 PM
Interesting poem Daniel . I too, love the ending :)
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Date: 6/1/2017 2:34:00 PM
That last line really sew this up nicely Daniel. Well written my friend.
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