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The Dear Three

Oh, how I love the dear three I can’t get enough of! Any day - not one pet could there be as sweet as they. Each day they’re here when life gets hard. My pup so cute and small; one cat with yellow eyes with great pride I regard. One cat, curled-eared and white, is clever, I surmise. Those three – I love them all. They are my comfort and delight. (Each stanza has a rhyme scheme of A/B/C/A/D/C/B/D) Sept. 5, 2022 For the Charlie New-Ku Poetry Contest of Charlie Messina: A rhyming haiku with two stanzas. The first has a syllable count of 4,3,3,3,3,3,3,4 and the second has a syllable count of 8,6,6,6,6,6,6,8.

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Date: 10/24/2022 8:32:00 AM
Andrea, Another towering trophy top spot with a piece whose charm sustains the reader start to finish. I truly value your comments on my soup Poems. Interlocking rueful sky etc is no exception Deep gratitude Howard
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Date: 10/20/2022 6:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner describing your exciting life with pets. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/19/2022 8:18:00 PM
Congratulations! Loving the pet theme!
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Date: 10/19/2022 1:51:00 PM
Back with big congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/19/2022 2:31:00 AM
Beautiful three pets. Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/18/2022 2:43:00 PM
I've had cats and dogs my whole life and I know how attached we can get to them. Lovely write penned so well, Andrea. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Charlie
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Date: 9/19/2022 12:08:00 PM
awww, lovely tribute to your new 'babies'
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Date: 9/11/2022 7:49:00 AM
All three are blessed to have you in there family. :-) I enjoyed reading more about your extended family, Andrea. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Date: 9/8/2022 7:46:00 AM
Andrea, you can't help but love them! We support them 24/7 and they reciprocate especially when we're down, a beautiful arrangement that is nicely reflected in your verse.
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Date: 9/8/2022 6:43:00 AM
Andrea, such a sweet poem about your fur babies. Pets are a gifts from God, he didn't give them wings so we would not know they were angels and he obviously thought you needed three, best of luck in the contest but to me this would be a winner, peace and tranquility ~ (I sent you a soupmail today)
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Date: 9/7/2022 6:50:00 PM
Very cute and sweet. I was going to ask you what the interesting form is, but you explained it at the bottom.
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Date: 9/7/2022 2:36:00 PM
Love the poem about your much loved pets. Love all the pictures you post of them too.
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Date: 9/7/2022 4:32:00 AM
Stopped by again. I am sure I'll stop again when it is on the list. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Date: 9/7/2022 3:22:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea. You have any reader smiling. Pets are not animals they are family with great love comfort and personality. Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you for sharing with us. Best wishes for the contest. Thank you.
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Date: 9/6/2022 1:39:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem about your pets Andrea. Special for sure! :)
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Date: 9/6/2022 11:51:00 AM
I remember trying to write one of these but don't know if the contest has been judged. This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my blog. Sara
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Date: 9/6/2022 11:14:00 AM
Aww, so sweet to think of your critters and honor them with this cute poem Andrea. My pets have aways been my confidantes and share a lot of intimate details that are not spoken aloud. ;) Linda
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Date: 9/6/2022 1:07:00 AM
So sweet, your fur babies sound adorable. Precious poem <3
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