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The Dark Night Premiere Contest Winner

The evil in the darkness crept upon me like a haunted soul it's swirling stench entrenched itself in my veins like a cauldron bubbling filled with shadows that covet my throat with its knife's edge to let my blood drip onto the floor of eternity without conscience, leaving a barren space growing darker as death comes towards to blackened an already black night where my skin crawls exposed to uncertainty to breathe another breath in a nightmare where there is no escape, finding me minuscule as to not be worthy of its evil wrath it was there I found peace for my fate 9/12/17 contest In The Dark

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Date: 4/15/2018 10:45:00 PM
Belated congrats on your gold medal finish, Frederic.
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Date: 1/22/2018 9:33:00 PM
Evil so grippingly described, Frederic. Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 1/22/2018 7:31:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on another fine win for this dark, traumatic poem of fear. I see below it was inspired by hurricane Irma...powerfully written. Sandra
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Date: 1/22/2018 5:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this riveting poem, Frederic.
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Date: 9/27/2017 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your fabulous first place. The poem is overwhelming, as was the inspiration behind it.
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Date: 9/23/2017 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win Frederic! :)
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Date: 9/23/2017 4:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:20:00 AM
Frederic, CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this amazing poem!
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Frederic ,absolute wonderful and deep write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:25:00 AM
Dark and disturbing Frederic, congrats on this trophy winner.
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Date: 9/22/2017 7:17:00 AM
Darkness takes a beastly toll on our minds. This is a great write, Frederic, so I'm congratulating you on your worthy win.
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Date: 9/22/2017 6:53:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend on 1'st place...well deserved Frederic...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:19:00 AM
- A terrible experience, Frederic ... yes a nightmare - Huge powers !!!! - Glad everything went well with you and your family - A great poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2017 2:34:00 PM
- They may not have power, Frederic - I hope all is well with her - Andrea had contact with her earlier ... ask her - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/13/2017 9:26:00 AM
thank you Sunshine, it is something I hope no one has to experience again...still haven't heard from Carolyn e-mailed her, hope things went well for her

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