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Written and Posted January 31, 2017
Revised, October 14, 2023
For The Premiere Contest, 
“Wild Animal – Personification
Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

The Dangerous Sahara

I walk these plains of sun-dried grass 
  together in a row 
with other elephants and calves 
  to search for food- then go
for miles in thirst, to find a drink
  as dry season appears.
I walk along and stay in sync, 
  alert with eyes and ears.

But, land in our domain is less, 
  encroached by humankind,
uncaring that our crowded space
  harms our state of mind.
Still worse, I have become aware
  of threats- the cruelest kind,
alert to watch and hide, beware 
  of horrors which I find.

So oft I see a sight disturbed, 
  sprawled out along our path;
a member of our precious herd- 
  we trumpet loud with wrath!
Then stop to mourn as humans do; 
  stand vigil, and grief-filled
caress the faceless friend we knew 
  who for its tusks, was killed.

Now, cautiously I live my days, 
  fulfilling nature's reign,
in my deep hope to drink and graze-
  and procreate my strain.
Our hide is dark, our tusks are white;
   stand out in day and night.
For them, we're martyred every day.
   To end our deaths- I pray.
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Borke Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 12:34 PM
You write great poems. As to the topic, humans first; at some point elephant populations need to be controlled.
Martin Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 10:19 AM
This write shows great empathy. Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra! :-)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 12:10 AM
It discloses the feeling of animal which I've witnessed in elephant mother crying for it dead small one, when in India. I do hope one day we stop killing them and doing them harm. Congrats Sandra :)
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 2:54 AM
Very sad but true view of an elephant, Sandra:) hope it does well in the contest:)
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:11 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. I appreciate your positive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Wanter Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 6:45 PM
So nice to read something extolling these wonderful creatures!
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:11 PM
I am happy for your support and nice comment, Sunlite! Thanks so much. Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 6:43 PM
It is quite a shame what us humans are doing to this Earth! An excellent write!
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:10 PM
Yes, it is, White Wolf. Thank you for your uplifting comment. Sandra
Turner Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Beautiful as only you could write, Mrs Sandra. Good luck, although I doubt luck has anything to do with it:)
Haight Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 7:09 PM
Thank you again, Daniel. It is so sad that these things happen. I appreciate your support and best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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