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Written and Posted January 31, 2017
Revised, October 14, 2023
For The Premiere Contest, 
“Wild Animal – Personification
Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

I walk these plains of sun-dried grass together in a row with other elephants and calves to search for food- then go for miles in thirst, to find a drink as dry season appears. I walk along and stay in sync, alert with eyes and ears. But, land in our domain is less, encroached by humankind, uncaring that our crowded space harms our state of mind. Still worse, I have become aware of threats- the cruelest kind, alert to watch and hide, beware of horrors which I find. So oft I see a sight disturbed, sprawled out along our path; a member of our precious herd- we trumpet loud with wrath! Then stop to mourn as humans do; stand vigil, and grief-filled caress the faceless friend we knew who for its tusks, was killed. Now, cautiously I live my days, fulfilling nature's reign, in my deep hope to drink and graze- and procreate my strain. Our hide is dark, our tusks are white; stand out in day and night. For them, we're martyred every day. To end our deaths- I pray.

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Date: 7/28/2017 12:34:00 PM
You write great poems. As to the topic, humans first; at some point elephant populations need to be controlled.
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Date: 2/11/2017 10:19:00 AM
This write shows great empathy. Congratulations on your well deserved win Sandra! :-)
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Date: 2/10/2017 12:10:00 AM
It discloses the feeling of animal which I've witnessed in elephant mother crying for it dead small one, when in India. I do hope one day we stop killing them and doing them harm. Congrats Sandra :)
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Date: 2/2/2017 2:54:00 AM
Very sad but true view of an elephant, Sandra:) hope it does well in the contest:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/6/2017 7:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. I appreciate your positive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/31/2017 6:45:00 PM
So nice to read something extolling these wonderful creatures!
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Date: 2/6/2017 7:11:00 PM
I am happy for your support and nice comment, Sunlite! Thanks so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 1/31/2017 6:43:00 PM
It is quite a shame what us humans are doing to this Earth! An excellent write!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/6/2017 7:10:00 PM
Yes, it is, White Wolf. Thank you for your uplifting comment. Sandra
Date: 1/31/2017 5:00:00 PM
Beautiful as only you could write, Mrs Sandra. Good luck, although I doubt luck has anything to do with it:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/6/2017 7:09:00 PM
Thank you again, Daniel. It is so sad that these things happen. I appreciate your support and best wishes for the contest. Sandra

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