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The Dance of Nature

a large school of fish in unison each fish turn the dance of nature

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/1/2022 10:27:00 PM

Wow! you painted a beautiful picture, Bill. Thank you.

Bill Baker
Date: 10/2/2022 10:33:00 AM

Glad you liked it, Shirley. Fun write for me. Hugs, Bill

Valsa George

Date: 9/23/2022 8:34:00 PM

Watching the slick movements of fish in water is always fun, perhaps more enjoyable than watching a graceful dance. Beautiful dear Bill

Bill Baker
Date: 9/24/2022 2:00:00 PM

I agree, Valsa nice comparison. :-) Bill

Panagiota Romios

Date: 9/18/2022 10:18:00 PM

Superb pen! Pangie xx

Bill Baker
Date: 9/19/2022 6:42:00 AM

Thank you, Panagiota, for reading my poetry. Hugs, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/17/2022 7:54:00 AM

Beautiful poetry, Bill. Such elegance may be seen in the way that they behave. Regards to you dear friend.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/17/2022 3:10:00 PM

Nature is filled with wonders and things we can hardly believe, I love to observe and be wowed! Thanks for reding and comment on my poetry, Lasaad. Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2022 8:29:00 PM

LOVE this. you are on a roll with cool bitty poems.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/17/2022 6:50:00 AM

With so little time to write right now, I'm just getting these short poems posted to stay active. Thanks for the encouragement, Andrea. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/16/2022 2:01:00 PM

This has such a delicate prettiness.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/16/2022 3:27:00 PM

It's always amazing to me how they can be so synchronized. Thanks for the comment. Bill

Terrell Martin

Date: 9/16/2022 9:26:00 AM

Hi Bill, I'm finally back up and running with a new computer and in my spare time reading and writing, including Haiku. It's a new challenge for me but I can very much appreciate the beauty of this one...well done my friend.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/16/2022 3:34:00 PM

Glad to have you back on track, Terrell. You were missed my friend. I'm going to have to get a new computer before the end of the year, just hate to have to change all the links I have coming to this one. LOL I'll check out your new poems soon Terrell. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/15/2022 12:13:00 PM

Hey Bill. I don't get to see many large schools in ETexas but those little shiners are fun to watch in the creek. :) Linda

Bill Baker
Date: 9/15/2022 12:37:00 PM

Yep, I remember all those from my childhood visit to Como and Sulphur Springs, where my mama lived. I had an Uncle and Aunt that lived in Tyler. Have a great week, my friend. Bill

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/14/2022 10:19:00 PM

Very visual, love this.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/15/2022 8:48:00 AM

Thanks, Harry. I used to snorkel and loved to watch underwater ballet. :-) Have a blessed week my dear friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/14/2022 5:25:00 AM

They are interesting to watch on film shown on TV. Birds do their own aerial dance as well. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 9/15/2022 8:51:00 AM

You're right, Sara, birds are amazingly in touch with each other. I really enjoy the birds feeding in our yard and trees. Thanks for the nice comment my dear friend. Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2022 7:16:00 PM

Gosh, such a refreshing observation. The first synchronized swimmers, I guess... Nice turn of phrase! ~ kudos, Gershon

Bill Baker
Date: 9/15/2022 8:52:00 AM

I thought about the word synchronized, but the syllables didn't work out. LOL Great comment! Have a great week, Gershon. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/13/2022 2:59:00 PM

you so simply captured the dance that is nature...your poem is just simply beautiful and eloquent in its own way. Thanks for sharing

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/13/2022 6:09:00 AM

Lovely poem Bill. So much grace as they move about. Best to you.

Bill Baker
Date: 9/13/2022 7:33:00 AM

Thanks, Vijay. I used to snorkle and suba for the quiet and beauty. Best to you too, my friend. Bill

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/13/2022 4:27:00 AM

Only together is it a dance. XXX

Bill Baker
Date: 9/13/2022 7:34:00 AM

I agree, Kai. Thanks for the visit and comment! Bill

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/12/2022 7:32:00 PM

I have always wondered how they do that, but they do. I've seen it some many times in my aquarium (when I had one).

Bill Baker
Date: 9/13/2022 7:35:00 AM

I seen it when suba diving, but more recently on the T.V. screens at Wal-mart. lol Thanks for the visit and comment, Milt. Have a good day my friend! Bill

Jeff Kyser

Date: 9/12/2022 6:31:00 PM

Q: What did the one mackerel say to the other? A: Turn around! Tuna 'round!

Bill Baker
Date: 9/13/2022 7:37:00 AM

Both are good replies, Jeff. Nice wit, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill