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The Cycle of Past, Present, And Future

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The human life cycle

I left the past, in all its fullness, thinking, surely life isn’t complete. Next came the present, a flower in full bloom; it is so sweet. The past, a mere seed: it must have been. For the present was surely growing within. Then came a vision of the present extending into the future, Life’s parts drawn together like a surgical suture. My thoughts were evolving, trying by explaining, Life can be more by expanding and remaining. Just as the present comes from the thoughts of the past, Our future is born from our dreams so vast. It’s our present thoughts, our dreams’ full array, That brings the dawning of each new day. Our futures are fleeting, they too will not last; They become the seeds for our next past. The cycle continues, round and round, Can the start or the end ever be found?

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/3/2023 5:16:00 AM

-- Our future is born from our dreams so vast. It’s our present thoughts, our dreams’ full array, That brings the dawning of each new day--- much depth to your poem, my friend. A FAVE for your meaningful words of wisdom, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/3/2023 9:34:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comments, Vijay. Your FAV means a lot to me. :-) Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/3/2023 4:19:00 AM

Such a wonderful poem my friend. 'Today is tomorrow's yesterday'.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/3/2023 10:11:00 PM

I agree, Jerry, you get it! Thanks for the comment, my friend. Have a great week! Bill

Valsa George

Date: 12/3/2023 12:47:00 AM

Life is moving in cyclic motion. We cannot find when it started and where it ends. Past, present and future are a continuum. Your philosophical broodings, make us think and think deeper about life. Bill, you are a master of excellent rhyming. Enjoyed this deep and profound contemplation on life.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/3/2023 10:13:00 PM

Thank you, my sweet Indian friend. Your comments are blessings for my poetic efforts. Thank you, my dear friend, Valsa. Big hug for the start of your week, Bill

Ink Empress

Date: 12/2/2023 11:27:00 PM

I havent read many poems on life cycle but you’ve as always gone for something that not many would write on, a brilliant take this is, i love your rhymes, you really are an excellent rhymester, and i love the opening lines how you started it and described past and present in such a creative manner is truly impeccable! The ending with the question definitely gets readers to ponder too. Pleasure reading this as always. An excellent poem

Bill Baker
Date: 12/3/2023 10:16:00 PM

Your comments are an encouragement to write more thoughtful poetry, Ink. I do appreciate the time and effort you put into helpings Sara and me with our development as poets. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2023 7:49:00 PM

This is brilliant, my friend. FAVE right away. Thanks, gw

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 9:48:00 PM

Thanks for the FAV, gw. Always nice to see them. BB

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/2/2023 7:01:00 PM

Bill, your poem is simply excellent! Your impressive ideas and patterns captivate me, and your poem made me ponder them thoroughly. I appreciate the remark about the future being our next past, as well as the start-to-finish contrast. Bill, your poetry is beautifully written and features breathtaking imagery.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 9:49:00 PM

Thank you for the glowing comments, my friend. Still learning, but appreciate the visits and comments. Bill

David Fisher

Date: 12/2/2023 4:58:00 PM

Love the challenge of keeping up with your thoughts on this insightful write, Bill. It's certainly helpful to read it a few times, but then it seems to change again. So clever a method to go with the theme!

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 5:13:00 PM

It can be a challenge, David. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry, my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 12/2/2023 3:05:00 PM

This cycle is one I have grappled with, very thought provoking poem, I particularly like the future being our next past, and the start and the end, great lines Bill

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/2/2023 3:19:00 PM

Thanks Bill, I hope I don't disappoint

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:13:00 PM

Thank you for the visit and comments, Clive. I just started following your poetry and will visit soon to catch up a little on past poems. My wife. Sara Etgen-Baker has been reading tour poetry, as you have hers, she suggested I follow your poetry. Have a great weekend! Bill