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The Colours of Love

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YOU have brought the sunshine back into my life A golden glow shines out from my radiant face Looking in your blue eyes I know the grey days of the past are behind me I blush scarlet, when you take my hand and whisper I love you Onlookers may be green with envy seeing the love we share You are the missing jigsaw piece I was desperately hoping to find We fit together so snugly and now my life is complete Never dreamed I would find my soulmate whilst out walking in the park 06~08~16

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/6/2018 9:52:00 PM

Congrats on your very sweet win, Jan. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2018 12:19:00 AM

Thanks line:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/26/2018 7:05:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congratulations on your first place win, it is much deserved with this wonderful piece, so gentle are the words that softly enter the heart. This song does sing to me of love and i smile. This one goes in my faves. Have a wonderful tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 3/7/2018 12:19:00 AM

Thanks so much Mike, you have so much love which shines in your beautiful poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/26/2018 3:04:00 PM

So lovely to read your beautiful poem again, Jan. Congrats on your on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2018 3:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandra, I had forgotten will about this poem and am delighted it got placed in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/26/2018 11:33:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan! ... And written on the 40th wedding anniversary (of my first marriage) no less! A great trophy winner! Kudos. :) Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2018 3:09:00 PM

Oh what a coincidence gershon, I rarely write romantic poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/26/2018 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2018 3:08:00 PM

Thanks so much tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/26/2018 6:56:00 AM

You never know where you will meet the love of your life. This is beautiful Jan. Congratulations on your first placement! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2018 7:33:00 AM

I met my hubby when we were both volunteers at a hospital radio station:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 2/26/2018 5:30:00 AM

oh those pretty blue eyes have a hold on you! Lovely and beautiful poem sweet Jan :) thank you and congrats : )-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 2/26/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thanks so much luloo:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 6/11/2016 1:27:00 PM

Jan, congrats on your placement in the contest lovely lady! :)-luloo

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/11/2016 11:45:00 AM

Jan this is beautiful. Congratulations...Seren

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 11:48:00 AM

Thanks so much Seren:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2016 5:36:00 AM

Lovely write Jan...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:06:00 AM

Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx

Francis J Grasso

Date: 6/10/2016 10:08:00 PM

Beautiful, Jan. Congratulations! ...Fran

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:06:00 AM

Thanks Franco:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/10/2016 8:11:00 PM

Beautiful, Jan. Congratulations on your placement in the 'colors of love' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/10/2016 7:13:00 PM

WAY to GO, Jan. You just made it into the top ten!! A great poem too by the way!! Why do you Brits keep misspelling color? hahaha

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Andrea - long as it gets read that's the important part:-) hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 6/10/2016 6:57:00 PM

Hi Jan, Very beautiful poem with such graceful sentimentality. I wish you would have placed higher but it is nice to be recognized. Great job. I gave you a 7. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:08:00 AM

I'm just happy to get the poem read Earl and contests are a great way of getting greater exposure to our work:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Quigley

Date: 6/10/2016 6:56:00 PM

Congrats Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Tom:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 6/10/2016 5:23:00 PM

Lovely Jan. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:09:00 AM

Thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2016 5:03:00 PM

- Congratulations on your tenth place at your beautiful poem, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2016 7:08:00 AM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/10/2016 4:49:00 PM

Beautiful poem my lovely passionate friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2016 4:58:00 PM

Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/10/2016 4:42:00 PM

Your poem glows! Wonderfully done!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2016 4:58:00 PM

Thanks Cas:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 6/10/2016 4:25:00 PM

Beautifully penned Jan, walking in the park changed a person's life :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2016 4:27:00 PM

many thanks for dropping by Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/10/2016 7:40:00 AM

I like the colours you shared with us Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2016 11:03:00 AM

Thanks Richard I hope Cas likes it too:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/9/2016 11:26:00 PM

Wonderful write Jan...best wishes

Jan Allison
Date: 6/10/2016 1:54:00 AM

Thanks Joseph - yours is tons better and will place well not sure about mine but I write inspired by contests and a win is a bonus :-) hugs Jan xx

Unknown Person

Date: 6/9/2016 5:45:00 AM

your emotions in poem are blended beautifully...awesome write...I loved it..

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2016 6:16:00 AM

Thanks so much Lekhiga:-) hugs Jan xx

Jolene Cheyney

Date: 6/9/2016 3:57:00 AM

Hmmmmm, I have been searching for my soulmate for a while. I used to take children that I babysat years ago to the park. At the time didn't notice any soul mates finding each other. Would like to believe it happens that way from time to time. Maybe I'll try spending more time at the park.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2016 6:16:00 AM

You never know who or what is around the next corner Jolene:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/9/2016 3:30:00 AM

Such a sweet romantic write, Jan:) "You are the missing jigsaw piece I was desperately hoping to find We fit together so snugly and now my life is complete" - that's so nice to hear:)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2016 6:15:00 AM

Been married 25 years later this month - how time flies:-) hugs Jan xx