Jan Allison Poet Free verse

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The Colours of Love

YOU have brought the sunshine back into my life
A golden glow shines out from my radiant face
Looking in your blue eyes I know the grey days of the past are behind me
I blush scarlet, when you take my hand and whisper I love you
Onlookers may be green with envy seeing the love we share
You are the missing jigsaw piece I was desperately hoping to find
We fit together so snugly and now my life is complete
Never dreamed I would find my soulmate whilst out walking in the park


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Line Gauthier March 6, 2018 at 9:52 PM Congrats on your very sweet win, Jan. Well done. Jan Allison March 7, 2018 at 12:19 AM Thanks line:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven February 26, 2018 at 7:05 PM Hi Jan, Congratulations on your first place win, it is much deserved with this wonderful piece, so gentle are the words that softly enter the heart. This song does sing to me of love and i smile. This one goes in my faves. Have a wonderful tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Jan Allison March 7, 2018 at 12:19 AM Thanks so much Mike, you have so much love which shines in your beautiful poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight February 26, 2018 at 3:04 PM So lovely to read your beautiful poem again, Jan. Congrats on your on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison February 26, 2018 at 3:12 PM Thanks so much Sandra, I had forgotten will about this poem and am delighted it got placed in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf February 26, 2018 at 11:33 AM Beautiful, Jan! ... And written on the 40th wedding anniversary (of my first marriage) no less! A great trophy winner! Kudos. :) Gershon Jan Allison February 26, 2018 at 3:09 PM Oh what a coincidence gershon, I rarely write romantic poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham February 26, 2018 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on your win Jan Tom Jan Allison February 26, 2018 at 3:08 PM Thanks so much tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong February 26, 2018 at 6:56 AM You never know where you will meet the love of your life. This is beautiful Jan. Congratulations on your first placement! : ) Jan Allison February 26, 2018 at 7:33 AM I met my hubby when we were both volunteers at a hospital radio station:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars February 26, 2018 at 5:30 AM oh those pretty blue eyes have a hold on you! Lovely and beautiful poem sweet Jan :) thank you and congrats : )-luloo Jan Allison February 26, 2018 at 7:32 AM Thanks so much luloo:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars June 11, 2016 at 1:27 PM Jan, congrats on your placement in the contest lovely lady! :)-luloo

Seren Roberts June 11, 2016 at 11:45 AM Jan this is beautiful. Congratulations...Seren Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 11:48 AM Thanks so much Seren:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May June 11, 2016 at 5:36 AM Lovely write Jan...Congrats on your win Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:06 AM Thanks Jospeh:-) hugs jan xx

Francis J Grasso June 10, 2016 at 10:08 PM Beautiful, Jan. Congratulations! ...Fran Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:06 AM Thanks Franco:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight June 10, 2016 at 8:11 PM Beautiful, Jan. Congratulations on your placement in the 'colors of love' contest. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:07 AM Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2016 at 7:13 PM WAY to GO, Jan. You just made it into the top ten!! A great poem too by the way!! Why do you Brits keep misspelling color? hahaha Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:07 AM Thanks Andrea - long as it gets read that's the important part:-) hugs Jan xx

Earl Schumacker June 10, 2016 at 6:57 PM Hi Jan, Very beautiful poem with such graceful sentimentality. I wish you would have placed higher but it is nice to be recognized. Great job. I gave you a 7. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:08 AM I'm just happy to get the poem read Earl and contests are a great way of getting greater exposure to our work:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Quigley June 10, 2016 at 6:56 PM Congrats Jan! Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:09 AM Thanks Tom:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray June 10, 2016 at 5:23 PM Lovely Jan. Well done. Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:09 AM Thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2016 at 5:03 PM - Congratulations on your tenth place at your beautiful poem, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison June 11, 2016 at 7:08 AM Thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath June 10, 2016 at 4:49 PM Beautiful poem my lovely passionate friend. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl Jan Allison June 10, 2016 at 4:58 PM Thanks BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance June 10, 2016 at 4:42 PM Your poem glows! Wonderfully done! Jan Allison June 10, 2016 at 4:58 PM Thanks Cas:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar June 10, 2016 at 4:25 PM Beautifully penned Jan, walking in the park changed a person's life :) Jan Allison June 10, 2016 at 4:27 PM many thanks for dropping by Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux June 10, 2016 at 7:40 AM I like the colours you shared with us Jan. Jan Allison June 10, 2016 at 11:03 AM Thanks Richard I hope Cas likes it too:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May June 9, 2016 at 11:26 PM Wonderful write Jan...best wishes Jan Allison June 10, 2016 at 1:54 AM Thanks Joseph - yours is tons better and will place well not sure about mine but I write inspired by contests and a win is a bonus :-) hugs Jan xx

Unknown Person June 9, 2016 at 5:45 AM your emotions in poem are blended beautifully...awesome write...I loved it.. Jan Allison June 9, 2016 at 6:16 AM Thanks so much Lekhiga:-) hugs Jan xx

Jolene Cheyney June 9, 2016 at 3:57 AM Hmmmmm, I have been searching for my soulmate for a while. I used to take children that I babysat years ago to the park. At the time didn't notice any soul mates finding each other. Would like to believe it happens that way from time to time. Maybe I'll try spending more time at the park. Jan Allison June 9, 2016 at 6:16 AM You never know who or what is around the next corner Jolene:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel June 9, 2016 at 3:30 AM Such a sweet romantic write, Jan:) "You are the missing jigsaw piece I was desperately hoping to find We fit together so snugly and now my life is complete" - that's so nice to hear:) Jan Allison June 9, 2016 at 6:15 AM Been married 25 years later this month - how time flies:-) hugs Jan xx

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